Inside of You - Comments

i fucking love it. c:
but wtf at the layout? xD it's kinda weird. :3

well!!! she was sooo out of the blue!! cute chapter!! i love how John can put with her even when she is a bit crazy!!

It seems pretty realistic to me. But, I don't know too much about cancer, or wills, either. Lol. Andy is being a huge bitch, but I can't completely hate her, and that just makes me even more angry at her character. Lol. I'm glad that John followed her out to the car, and then accompanied her to the meeting. I thought the whole asking Olivia out and necklace was completely adorable. John is such a softy, but I love him for it. Hahaa. I just hope John doesn't fall back into old habits or anything like that, once the thrill is over! And I can't wait for more! (:

ANDY is such a .. AARRRGGHHHH! she sucks right now!
i totally love John he is soooooooooo sweet!!
Update soon:)

I like that chapter a lot.
I like how you can make something sad yet cute at the same time.

Keep up the good work.
:)

Love it! Can't wait for the next update!

Oh, shit. I was glad in the beginning, because she is attempting to put on a happy face, and do as her mother wished: be happy and keep living life. However, when Andy came into the scene, I kind've wanted to punch her face in. I understand that she's upset, maybe because of Olivia's absence, but honestly, it's not her fault that their mother died. I think Andy needs to see that! I loved this, as usual! (:

So a keeper! I love this so much. I'm a Garrett girl but I really like this and I plan on subscribing so keep it up.

Interesting...!:)

Awe. This chapter was so sad. I was glad that John came to see her, though. And I understand what she means by not wanting people to lie to her, but what does she expect them to say? They have to be optimistic, since she's obviously not. Lol. I really hope that her mom pulls through, but even if she doesn't, at least Olivia knows that her mother hear her and has a plan set up for her and Andy.

You just made my day by updating. :] I loved it.

STILL AMAZING! :) loved it :) i can't believe this story i mean its one thing then another and another it just keeps getting better :)

Oh, fuck! I can't believe that her mom has cancer! ):
And I can't blame her, I'd feel so guilty for running away and then finding out
All of this. I'd feel like it was partly my fault.
I can't wait for more! (:

Oh my! :0 love it! can't wait for next update!

This is a cute story :)

And just to switch things up and get a bit of rivalry going I'll go for the all round nice guy, just a friend figure and total underdog Garrett!!
Even if he doesn't have a chance haha...=P

I very much enjoy your story. And like everyone else I do have to say, Team Johnny Boy O'Callaghan.

:O
so interesting<3
deffinatley keep up the great work!

You keep commenting on my stories so i just HAD to read and comment on yours :) i LOVE this story. You're a better writer then me :) more please? lol.

Hehee! Olivia and John finally macked! Oh, pft. They waited long for that?! I waited through three (or 4? Lol) chapters for that! I'm glad that they both got their feelings out in the open though, even if Olivia didn't officialy respond back to his! Lol. And oh, goodness! That ending! I was not expecting that! I hope her mom and sister are okay! ):

AAAHHHHH haha when i read it i thought omg that fast man i liked the drama :0 then thhat happened and im like oh yeah i know this is gonna be an awesome story !!!:)))
love it can't wait for the next update:)) HI LYS!