Ohhh I like this. I'm wondering just what this bishop does that Gerard doesn't like. Gerard is amazing. I just... Gah. He's perfect and Gerard-ly. I hope Mikey stays away from the creep bishop. And I can't wait for this sleepover. *eyebrow wiggle*
I loved the update and I did catch on. Naughty Bishop, I have a feeling he's going to play a big part in this story? Or is that just me or just a feeling? I can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story, more soon!
Yay for Gerard. He seems to have his head in the right place. :) I get a really creepy feeling from that bishop. I think I know where you were headed with that, but I won't say it incase I'm completely off x]
I really love this story and hope you update soon. :)
Ooooh. Bad child pervert Bishop. But haha, I love Gerard's random spring of talking about Brendon being gay. It actually made me laugh out loud. :) More soon please<3
I have a feeling that the bishop is a creeper and is going to hurt Mikey somehow. But, I'm glad Gerard doesn't have the same reasoning as Mikey, considering sexuality - I like his point better, haha. The length doesn't matter, it's quality, not quantity :)
ah, I'm so glad Gerard knocked some sense into Mikey! Bad bishop, he seems nasty... Mikey better stay away from him! Loved this chapter, it was really good, update soon!
WOO! Mikey has a wet dream about Brendon! lol, it's so weird how happy i am aout that, easy to please, i guess... I love that gerards so nice to him about this, Mikey's so hard on himself! UPDATE SOON! i don't mind being a pest if i get updates :D
Awwwh, poor innocent Mikey!! I loved the update and I can't wait to read more!! This story is awesome!! :D! I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
Oh my god (... Is that a pun? DAMMIT) This story has me, for whatever reason, choking back laughter. Brendon and Ryan are amazing, and it actually seems real. The religion... I just couldn't stop laughing. I can't picture Mikey that way. But I can see parents being that way. Mikey is so cute and innocent. :D In conclusion... I LOVE THIS STORY.
I really like the plot with this - authors usually stray away from bringing religion and homophobia (in one of the main "lover" characters, at least) and God into their stories, but you pulled it into the story. It's original and you're pulling it off quite well :)
I love Mikey's character, and how he has that sheltered, innocent vibe about him.
Just finished chapter four. I'll comment again after five. ;D
It was great because as soon as I clicked to read chapter four, my iPod shuffled to "Lying is the Most Fun..." How can it get anymore perfect than that? xD
Anywho, loved the chapter. All I could imagine while reading it was something like this:
*Brendon mounting Ryan in a passionate, disheveled kiss* Mikey: You guys are kissing! O: Brendon: *shifty eyes* ... No, we're not... >.>
Simply wonderful. xDD
Oh, and since you asked, I absolutely feel the need to make you a banner, now. I shall do so immediately.