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  • lizzicleromance

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    OH DEAR SWEET FRERARD GODS, THANK YOU FOR ALLOWING ME TO STUMBLE UPON THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I read the entire thing in one sitting, it was like an amazing book that you cannot put down!!! AND THEN TO REALIZE THERE IS A SEQUEL. I'M FLAILING SO HARD RIGHT NOW FROM HOW AMAZING THIS STORY BEGAN, PROGRESSED, AND ENDED.

    I love that it's got Frerard but I love that they are not the main focus. I am SUCH a Frerard girl but you had me so enthralled with Mikey's character that I didn't mind one bit that the Frerard aspect didn't happen for a few chapters.

    This has to be one of my favorite Mikeys EVER written!!! It's so different and unique from anything I have ever read before. Naive, sheltered, Mormon little Mikey!!!! Oh bless his Bible lovin little heart, he was so clueless and closeminded in the beginning... it was so perfectly written. And then when he lost that innocense, he still somehow had it. I am obsessed with Mikey's relationship with both Brendon and Ryan. They are just such beautiful boys and you write them so perfectly.

    AND THEN THAT ENDING!!! Those twists and plot turns, it's just so perfect!! You threw everything in right when the timing was better than perfect. You didn't rush things, you took your time developing these characters and their emotions and it was just such a wonderful story. I loved every moment of this and I'm off to comment the new story because I just HAD to read that before commenting! <3
    October 19th, 2013 at 09:33pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much <3 <3 <3
    January 4th, 2013 at 11:21am
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    OH GOOD LORD, you are giving me this FREAKIN' INCREDIBLE story and then links to MORE awesome stories to read at the bottom, I don't even know what to do right now.
    December 17th, 2012 at 06:10am
  • mikeystruelove

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    I finally finished it and well, I loved it! It was a bit more than I had initially thought, but then you can do that to us! Smile
    December 8th, 2012 at 04:14pm
  • bashthesirens

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    I literally am dying of awesomness because your parents helped you with DIRTY FANFICTION! ERR MERR GERRD I'm DYING!!!! :D
    November 26th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • singitfortheworldd37

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    OH my cod this is quite possibly the most beautiful fanfic of Mikey I have ever read.
    October 1st, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • Hello-DreamLand

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    Hi Ive been meaning to comment since i first started reading this but i always got so absorbed in this that each night i stayed up to late (like now) and didnt have time. Anyways I just wanted to tell you this in the begining but i didnt have time the start reminds me of Goodnight Mr Tom (but with more gay stuff). Ive finished it now but tomorrow (well today really) Ill start the next one I really enjoyed it thanks so so so much!!! :D :D

    -Ojjy
    May 14th, 2012 at 01:49am
  • thenastyloveblog

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    perf.
    May 1st, 2012 at 12:42am
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    I'm not a psychic. I just have the knack for knowing about stories before it even happens. It shows that I'm really into the stories because I take the time to read each word carefully, trying to find hidden meanings behind the words. I just have no life. ^_^

    I have mixed feelings now. Like, I'm happy that Brendon is alive. I really do. But, it's obvious that Mikey hasn't really moved on. His feelings for Brendon is too strong and where that will put Zacky if Brendon chose to come back? Brendon should've just let Mikey be. Let Mikey move along. Let Mikey be happy. Oh my God! And what happens to Ryan? And the rest of the guys?

    I love this kind of open ending. It makes me yearn for more but I know the story is over so I'm gonna just create my own version of this story in my head. ^_^

    Reading this story had been a very fun experience for it and I think this is one of the very few stories that I actually really commented because I just had too much to say about each update. You're amazing. And if you do write a sequel, I'll check it out. ^_^

    Great ending!
    April 27th, 2012 at 06:50am
  • Icamane Hatake

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    Ahh ahh ahhh ahhh I don't even know what to think...

    Like... I can't believe it's over! But it's not over! IT CAN'T BE! There MUST be a sequel!

    And Brendon... oh my gods, no way... at first I thought it was a recording of Brendon that Zacky had found... maybe it is and maybe Brendon's alive and WOMAN you must write more!

    I'm listening to The Calendar now and ahhhh... won't ever be able to listen to this song again without thinking of this story <3
    April 27th, 2012 at 02:54am
  • username007

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    Oh my gods why must you make me want to cry? I loved it and I'm happy you don't think I'm crazy talking about your story to other people. I do love it even now that its over. I beg of you, please write a sequel! If you make the sequel we will make sure you reach 500 comments. You deserve it. Thanks for writing this amazing story.
    April 26th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • Franklin Iero

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    For the love of god, please write a sequel.
    April 26th, 2012 at 08:59pm
  • killjoyceline

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    first off i want to say ive been a silent reader for a loooooong time
    this was an amazing ending and an amazing story

    you need to continue in a sequal plllllllllllz
    April 26th, 2012 at 08:51pm
  • Natural Born Killer

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    Geez. Thanks a fucking lot. I just started bawling in the middle of class and now everyone's staring at me and.. FUCK. My emotions are going crazy right now. That was... wow. I'm speechless.

    And I'm so sorry I failed you on the 500 comments thing ): My computer battery died for good, and I haven't been able to get online for a few days. Or else I totally would have forced people to comment x)

    But really... wow. I just love this so much <3 This story is absolutely phenomenal. I can't even begin to comprehend that this will be the last 'Sinners' update I'll ever get. It' s nearly heartbreaking D:
    April 26th, 2012 at 07:11pm
  • Sucks For You

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    SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!!!
    Erm... Please? :3
    I agree with JessicStar up there, I would die of curiousity if you don't make a sequel. And you don't want that on your onscience do you? :D
    I love love loved this story so much. You, my friend, are one hell of a writer. ♥
    April 26th, 2012 at 06:29pm
  • JessLoui

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    You should definately do a sequel!!!!
    I think I would die of curiosity if you didn't!
    April 26th, 2012 at 04:05pm
  • lostinlife191

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    Sequel please!!!!!!!
    April 26th, 2012 at 03:39pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Well I kind of saw it coming!! That it was a ruse so that their enemies would think they were dead so that Ryan and Brendon can escape!!!! Ryan didn't want anyone to know where they were, pretending to die in the accident!!! Probably so their mob enemies didn't know!!!! And yes I seen Zacky and Mikey dating and to say I never thought of that couple, is an honest opinion and awwwwwh Francis!!!!! Ahahah they do grow up so fast!!! My nieces and nephew are growling so fast that it's like D:!! Realy??? They need to stop growing!!! I really loved this story and I want a sequel!!! I can't wait to see it!!! oh my gosh, that makes me really excited!! I mean I have a feeling this will be about Brendon a lot!!! And like is he going to come back??? I mean I want to know that, is he going to cause Zacky and Mikey!! I don't know that kind of makes me D:, that happens!! Or is it going to be more about Ryan and Brendon and what had happened??? Either way I'd love a sequel to see where your mind takes it!! I mean you have this fabulous mind to think of all these thing!!! I really do love and will miss this story. Here I go rambling on again!! Yes!! I'm glad that my comment was the longest you have gotten!!
    April 26th, 2012 at 01:33pm
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    i love this story so much! sad for it to end, but hoping you'll continue in a sequal :)
    i have a question tho - i thought this was a waycest story originally?? or did i just completely imagine that haha
    April 26th, 2012 at 01:31pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    Holy crap!!!!! He's alive?!!?
    What a way to end a story!
    I loved this so much, you have no idea!
    Gonna be sad to see it go :(
    April 26th, 2012 at 11:49am