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  • chewing on tinfoil

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    I'll be sure not to tell myself that MCR WILL BE APPEARING IN ETERNAL BLOOD!!!!! ohmygod I'm so excited.

    And now for the chapter.

    I love how Mikey is so oblivious to everything. x] I loved this chapter, especially the ending. Haha. Please update soon. :)
    June 7th, 2010 at 07:48am
  • cannibal glow.

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    I like this so far. Usually, I tend to stay away from Waycest as, like evryyone said, it's usually the same old cliche of 'I lavz you!', 'I lavz choo too!' 'Lets fock' which just sucks. But this seems interesting and unique so far, I love your descriptions.
    Look forward to more.
    <3
    May 30th, 2010 at 04:19pm
  • the author

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    i like it, it's different :) please update soon!!!
    May 23rd, 2010 at 03:02pm
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    Hehe Mikey's having dirty thoughs about Brendon.

    Anywho, loved the update. Please update soon!
    May 22nd, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • Radar Detector.

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    I'm not even a fan of My Chemical Romance but I am a fan of your writing, so I gave it a go, and I'm already hooked.
    Keep it up. (:
    May 19th, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • TheGiinger

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    *new reader* Love this!! Please update soon!! It's so original!
    May 19th, 2010 at 10:03pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Oh my gosh!!! X_X, I can't wait to see how it's going to go (meeting his friends). This story is awesome so far and I can't wait to read more!
    May 19th, 2010 at 03:53pm
  • puckty

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    love love love this, you discribe the boys so well, I just don't really know what to say so I think I should stop
    May 19th, 2010 at 01:03pm
  • baysway

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    Excellent update. I love how Mikey's sexual awakening is starting to take over all his thoughts. Can't wait for more.
    May 19th, 2010 at 10:25am
  • Lion

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    I like this so far. Subscribed. :]

    As for tips about MCR fanfiction... Well, if you want to be utterly cliche, Mikey's going to be a clingy, nervous wreck with sepetation issues, and Gerard will be a cynical and apathetic tyrant... However, if you wish to be realistic, then Mikey's jusy gonna be a bit quiet and sheepish, into comics and lame-but-awesome stuff, and Gee will be the mature, concerned older brother with a rebellious side.

    So... yeah, you're doin' great. xDD
    May 19th, 2010 at 08:04am
  • animal soup

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    I'm addicted already, :)
    Update soon?
    May 14th, 2010 at 05:11am
  • Greta Morgan

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    This looks like it has a very promising future! Can't wait for you to update. I always enjoy a good noncliche waycest!

    Morgan
    May 13th, 2010 at 06:40pm
  • baysway

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    Excellent opening chapter. I am already intrigued. I have read other Waycest stories, but never with a storyline like this one. I look forward to more.
    May 12th, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Amazing!! I love it and I love how it's gonna be evolving and not just going right into it!! I like the descriptions and I can actually see them. I love how you made Mikey, too :D! I can't wait to read more!
    May 12th, 2010 at 03:14am
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    I really love this. It's amazing and detailed. And I also appreciate the not so cliche "Hi I love you, let's fuck" story line.

    Please update soon. :)
    May 12th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • xxSHADOWSVENGEANCExx

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    It seems so good so far!! cant wait for more!!
    May 11th, 2010 at 07:01pm
  • puckty

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    Amezing story I love it already. Nobody wrote fanfics with this kind of story line. Well at least not that I know. And I'm glad to know that I'm not the only one to think it's absurbed to write a story that goes from I tell you my name, my first conversation with you will end with I love you now let's sleep together to seel the deal. Please keep up the good writing :D
    May 11th, 2010 at 12:59pm