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    I'm reading this during my microcontroller lab and it's worth it. The lab is boring. -______-

    The beginning of the chapter was so smexay. I love it when you write sexy chapter. Ooooh... masochistic Brendon is so hot. *wink2*

    But, then, the chapter got sad and it makes me depress. I hate that Bishop and poor Brendon.

    I'm rambling now and I probably should get back to my lab module.

    Can't wait for the next update.
    December 14th, 2011 at 01:12pm
  • Natural Born Killer

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    God... that was so fucking sexy, and then,'...we both made a noise when our penises grazed,'.

    MIKEY. Y U BE SO AWKWARD. Don't get me wrong. It was still really fucking hot. But... penis. Hee, I'm such a child. Ah, at least he finally cussed. Baby steps.
    December 14th, 2011 at 01:50am
  • mikeystruelove

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    i love you sooooo much cuz you know just what I need! Okay so what do we do about the fact that it seems that Mikey and Bren are getting too close and Ry is a flippin psycho? Also thank you so very very much for picking up on the hint hint. So, I will be getting something for Christmas besides credit card bills! O JOY, you are my absolute fave, so shocked when I got the alert on my phone and you can has anything ya wants for Christmas! MWHAH! Maybe boysecks, teehee, like Mikey and Bren, I mean sad story aside, I really understand. I do, I promise just scratch mah itch a bit more please?
    December 14th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • puckty

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    Thank you, I'm feeling a lot better already,
    this story is just so well written, you're fantastic
    December 13th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • K_Shadows

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    Hell yeah!! It's 10:57 pm right now and I have to get up at 5:30 am to take a shower and go to school but I had to read the update. I love your writing so much it makes me fangirl over you. Hehehe (: me and Taylor (my girlfriend) love this story. Sometimes we think we are Brendon and Ryan. Really our slash characters are Gerard and Frank. We're the same age apart as them and she has a younger sister who is Mikey because she's my best friend. We really do have a Ferard love! That was so off topic but!!! I can't wait to read the next update. Your story always make me so happy. :D
    December 13th, 2011 at 06:01am
  • Danerys Targaryen

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    Just sitting here crying over what Bishop Gregory did to Brendon. I cannot believe someone would hurt such a, for lack of a better word, innocent boy. Seriously. I hope that he gets what's coming to him soon.
    And he better keep his nasty little paws off Mikey.
    December 13th, 2011 at 05:42am
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    Awww... don't doubt your own ability to write a great update just because less people are commenting. I know I'm guilty for not commenting the previous chapter and I have a good reason. I'm now back at college, which means, the internet connection sucks because my college line kinda block mibba so I have to hack the line and everything just so that I can log in.

    However, I'm making it up to you by commenting now. ^_^

    Gosh! I hope Ryan, and Frank and everyone just stop with those secret things already. I feel sorry for Mikey. I know I would feel pretty bad if everyone around me is keeping secrets from me. Especially the ones that I really love. That's not a good thing to do. Poor Mikey. But, if what Brendon was saying is true, then serve Pete right for trying to hurt Brendon. Well, nobody deserves to die that way but you know what I mean.

    Yes! I know I was right about that Bishop! *happy dance* No wonder Brendon was so afraid of him and Ryan's so protective over him whenever that Bishop is involved. I hope he won't hurt Mikey in the future. But, I'm kinda afraid of what Mikey would do to him now that he knows the truth.

    Now, is my comment enough to make up for not commenting before? I hope so because I want to make you happy so you would update. ^_^
    December 12th, 2011 at 10:32am
  • Icamane Hatake

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    OMGYES Arms Crazy
    Yay! Thank you! And what can I say, I love how you write them together Yes
    It was after a show of "The Importance of Being Earnest" which I was an assistant stage manager for.

    But YES! Anastasia! Definately one of my favorite animated movies eeeeeeeever! They were just so cute, watching it and then Brendon singing and gahhh cuteness!

    Hmm, not to say I didn't have my suspicions, but the rape part I didn't see coming. That was more than what I had expected. But poor Brendon :( Cry Did his singing have anything to do with it? I feel like it does, the way he talked about it...

    I kind of want to see what Mikey does next time he sees the Bishop, though xD That's going to be amazing. lmfao

    Much love, darling, it's fantastic as always <3
    December 12th, 2011 at 05:36am
  • mikeystruelove

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    Til next time :-) love ya better and better every single time you are my drug and I don't wanna detox so you can't make me! Kisses&Huggles!
    December 10th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • mikeystruelove

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    Oh baby I am sooooo sorry, I swore I sent the comment letting you know that you are indeed my master! And the story is beginning to mesh in my mind but ikd cos you my Preshusses have a way of blowing all my hypotheses clean out of the water! But about that bastard 'man of God, I knew. But these programs and edits I have need to be done like last month, I still and always will love ya and this story! So........I love the storyline and I also loooovvvee smut(hint,hint). And Hellraiser is a series of horror movies in which a box opens a gateway tp ultimate pleasure or absolute hell, usual mod is with hooks on chains, led by demons called cinobytes, the leader is Pinhead, check it out and you will see. see why so, my love I must go and I love Anastasia!
    December 10th, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    Welp. That was interesting. Update soon!!!
    <3
    December 10th, 2011 at 03:25am
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    This story gets better every time it updates. I kind of had to catch up a lot, but anyways I kind of saw it coming, but then again not. I thought maybe the bishop was abusing him in a physical sense, but not a sexual thing, y'know? anyways, the thing is, you kind of intertwined this movie called Doubt, which kind of had the same thing in it, but no one knew if the Bishop did it or not.

    I'm rambling, but I just thought about it, cause I was watching that and then I read this, and I was astonished. c: anyways, i'll start to keep up with the updates and comment each time you post. c:
    December 9th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • K_Shadows

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    Oh my gosh! No one has every commented me back like that before! I feel so loved. Me and my girlfriend who told me about this story talked it over last night on the phone. We were trying to put the puzzle together. She saw this coming but I didn't. I all mosted cried just now. It was great and I can't wait till the next update!! (: ps. I'm still smiling beceause you have Soul Punk!!!
    December 9th, 2011 at 12:27am
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    I kind of saw it coming because earlier in the story, Brendon hated the bishop. Anyways, that doesn't mean I didn't love the update, which I did c: I feel bad for Brendon and I wonder if Ryan even cares. And mikey, I hope he finally gets brendon. Great update dear c:
    December 8th, 2011 at 12:41pm
  • puckty

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    Only thing good about being sick, I got time to read your updates, which really is the best cure. I feel so bad for brendon, he's such an angle, and I just adore Mikey :D I really Hope you get more comments this time, since this is such an awesome story, every time I see you updated it I want to cheer (Which sometimes I really do)
    December 8th, 2011 at 08:23am
  • Danerys Targaryen

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    I don't think I've anticipated an update for a story more than this one. I absolutely adore this. It's amazing.

    Can't wait for the next update.

    And I hope Bishop Gregory rots in hell for what he did to Brendon >.<
    December 8th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • Natural Born Killer

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    Oooooooooh shit. I feel some major drama coming up.
    And on Pete's behalf, OUCH. This is one of the few reasons I'm glad I'm not a guy >.>
    And that's cool :3 Mibba is a good place to lose your pairing virginity :D I think I even lost my frerard virginity here... xD
    December 5th, 2011 at 05:11pm
  • BOOM!roasted.

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    Poor Mikey :( Update soon?
    December 4th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • puckty

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    Haven't had any time lately for anything other than school, but I kept seeing that you'd updated this story so the first chance I've got to read it (which is now)I toke, and it's amezing, so much happend in these chapters, a couple of questions I had are answerd but more qeustions are raised, can't wait to find out more about this, it's so intresting
    December 3rd, 2011 at 08:37pm
  • Icamane Hatake

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    So I'm completely exhausted but this update made me so happy :D

    AH QUIT TEASING US!!!! Crazy I'm still betting on some kind of cult/gang/Mafia... yeah.

    Poor Pete. That's cold... or should I say hot? For a desert?

    And the scene with Gee and Mikey... I loved it. I just lovelovelove scenes with them together. And I "aww"ed the whole time and I kinda want to hug them both and am wondering "GoddammitRyanwtf" and yeah I'm rambling xD It's midnight after a show, what's to be expected?

    I believe you can do it :] If nothing else, it'll be an epic mindfuck for Mikey lmfao
    December 2nd, 2011 at 07:49am