Naked - Comments

Please please please start this story back up!

This was really good I just wished it had more chapters and more "meat" to it.

i miss this story so much :(

this is REALLY good(:

Please update soon, you're keeping me on my toes! :D

this is probably my favorite story ever, i really hope you keep updating.

I absolutely love this story.
I like how you go off into the past, and sort of describe why Liz is the way she is.
She somewhat reminds me of myself, with taking comments and things as indications to her size.Though I've never done anything about it...
But anyway, I'm most definately subscribing, and I'd love it if you'd update soon. =]

I would very much enjoy an update. :)

I'd love for this to be updated!

Kudos on your ability to surprise me with your use of imagery. A nice change from teenage vampires getting teased at junior high because of their lack of certainty of their sexual orientation. An exciting concept.

The past chapters are my favorite. They have so much emotion in them. It's amazing. Poor Lizzie, though. She's started a huge downward spiral

awh this was cute as well as sad. i like the past and present chapters, i've wanted to do something like that but can never get it right. you're doing an excellent job! this chapter was really good. i can't wait for the next update c:

Awe! Dont hate the chapter! Its good and extremely sad

I like this story. (:

Not big on Sykes stories but I love this & Oli's mega hot to! Haha

I really, really, really like this story! I'm not a giant fan of BMTH, I've heard a few of their songs and like them, but this story is just amazing! I love the dynamic between Lizzie, Oliver and the band. It's really interesting and their relationship is soooo strange and intriguing. And I understand about school, update when you can.

This is an awesome story ; it's bitter sweet and I like that (:

I'm not a fan of Oli Skyes, but I love this story :D

i really like this story, please don't give up on it?

Im going to tell you right now, at this very moment that i am, consequently infatuated with this story. I seriously love the fuck out of it, and theres only been like 3 chapters so far. I love storys like this, and i dont know why but i think the most reasonable reason i can think of as to why i like to much is because its so different. At first, it was like it was no big deal

Ex: oliver didnt like fat girls

But when you thought about it, thought about how sfless and naive she was being. I wanted to slap her. Fuck oliver, what about herself? If shes always looking for a validation by oliver then shes bound to get fucked up. What about what she wants? I hate the idea of someone changing anyhing about themselves for someone elses priority, but i love this to death sometimes i even cry. I cant even bare to imagine the pain she was going through. And when oli did that thing, he called her plump or chubby or something like that, i cried.

How could someone be as to so bitter and cruel and not eveb know what there doing to the other person. How could he not know that she took the things he said to heart, she was a little kid, she didnt know any better then to care about what people said abou her. Scratch that, not people, by people i mean oliver of course. Anyways, love this :) amazing. Update soon? :3

i dont know what it is about this story, but i love it! its intriguing.