i am very muchly in love with this story a lot. how embarrassing for her to see oliver while she is getting her first bra D: & the cheeck of him to say such things to her, at least she told him to go away, good on her! i can't wait for the next chapter, seriously. please update again soon. your writing is amazing and im fully hooked to this story. i like the way you have structured it as well with past and present chapters (:
I love the way you write, it's so real. I can feel the character's emotions and your use of vocabulary weaved together perfectly. I was laughing to myself when I read about Lizzie's mom waving the bras around and Oli just watching in shock. Update soon please!
I'm in love with this. It just... to me, has that raw feeling, kind of. It's very different from most of the stories here on Mibba, I think. :P Update soon ?
Liz and Oliver have a strange relationship. I'm curious as to how they got together in the first place. All I can say is I love this and I love the way you write. Update soon please!
Oh god. This chapter made me depressed, and feel fat. ;____; But that means you're getting your point across perfectly! :D I love every second of it. Keep writing dearie!<3
I really liked it.! I love the way you write and I think it's fantastic how you express yourself. :) I like the idea, because it is daily to have eating disorders, but I feel that you'll turn your idea into an amazing, and unique story. :)
Im liking it a lot so far!