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  • fuuyeahEva

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    Story is amazing!
    Im liking it a lot so far!
    August 12th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • xXCyanideTearsXx

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    Love, love, love this story already! =)
    I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    xxxx
    August 9th, 2010 at 07:52pm
  • Flash Delirium.

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    Beautiful story, beautiful words.
    I'd say you have talent. And I'm quite stunned.
    I will be waiting for that next chapter.
    August 8th, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • boycott love

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    This is so good.
    I love it :)
    August 3rd, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • soapy

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    i am very muchly in love with this story a lot. how embarrassing for her to see oliver while she is getting her first bra D: & the cheeck of him to say such things to her, at least she told him to go away, good on her! i can't wait for the next chapter, seriously. please update again soon. your writing is amazing and im fully hooked to this story. i like the way you have structured it as well with past and present chapters (:
    August 3rd, 2010 at 07:41am
  • JckWhite

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    hahhaha
    I would have hurried and leave if Oliver Sykes saw me with my mum paying for bras XD
    It's a great story I love it
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    August 2nd, 2010 at 11:48pm
  • username123456

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    I love the way you write, it's so real. I can feel the character's emotions and your use of vocabulary weaved together perfectly.
    I was laughing to myself when I read about Lizzie's mom waving the bras around and Oli just watching in shock.
    Update soon please!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • ikickshins

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    I'm in love with this.
    It just... to me, has that raw feeling, kind of.
    It's very different from most of the stories here on Mibba,
    I think. :P
    Update soon ?
    August 2nd, 2010 at 10:09pm
  • rachellee

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    this is really good, im curious to see what the plot is.
    update sson <3
    July 31st, 2010 at 03:56am
  • LoddieLove

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    Your writing is amazing!
    Im really liking this story.
    July 31st, 2010 at 01:50am
  • tigermilk

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    I love everything you write ^___^
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:11am
  • alessa.evelina

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    Your writings always amaze me. It's beautiful. I cannot wait to read more.
    July 28th, 2010 at 10:09pm
  • erika_xtc

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    Amazing <3 It's rather odd reading about Oli when I just talked to him yesterday (and kissed him lol). He's super sweet and not a jerk at all.
    July 27th, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • username123456

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    Liz and Oliver have a strange relationship. I'm curious as to how they got together in the first place. All I can say is I love this and I love the way you write. Update soon please!
    July 27th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • spawned

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    this sounds veryyyy interesting.
    i'm intrigued(:
    i'd love to read more.
    keep up your AMAZING writing{:<
    July 26th, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • ShEsALaDy

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    Oh god. This chapter made me depressed, and feel fat. ;____; But that means you're getting your point across perfectly! :D I love every second of it. Keep writing dearie!<3
    July 26th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • JckWhite

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    awww thats was really cute :)
    July 26th, 2010 at 07:54pm
  • Sparky Wind

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    Simply adorable!! [=
    July 26th, 2010 at 04:45pm
  • alessa.evelina

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    I really liked it.! I love the way you write and I think it's fantastic how you express yourself. :)
    I like the idea, because it is daily to have eating disorders, but I feel that you'll turn your idea into an amazing, and unique story. :)

    cannot wait for more. :)
    July 26th, 2010 at 03:43pm
  • kristenevelyn

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    i really, really, really liked this first part.
    July 25th, 2010 at 11:31pm
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