Light in the Storm - Comments

I loved this story. It was amazing in every way. I loved the ending, and I see great things in the future of Lonnie and Nick! :)

Wow!!
You're skill in writing blows me away with every chapter!!
I LOVED the epilogue but more importantly I LOVED Light in the Storm!! It was such an amazing story, keeping me hooked with every word, every cliffhanger, even in the summary where I'd look at the little excerpt from the chapter; I'd be sitting on the edge of my chair.
The Nonnie series have defiantly been my favorite Nick Jonas fan-fic and my favorite series from you.
The best part to these series is how you progress Nick from being a young man who content with solitude and regards everything as a job to someone who is able to return love to Lonnie. =) It's amazing and adorable.
I absolutely cannot wait for Guiding Lights, the summary has got me hooked (naturally) and so many questions are burning through my brain at high speed to why Nick would have fainted.

...Can't wait for your amazing writing skills to blow my mind in all your stories to come.
Loz;;
=)

Trying to remain calm about the next posting, but I'm becoming obessed, checking the page every hour just to see when the Epiloge will be coming up...and I can't wait for Guiding Lights...I can't wait to see what it was that Nick fainted about...so many ideas are running through my mind...it's crazy!!!

Please update soon.(:

WOW. seriosuly. Wow. Speechless moment for me.

This has to be the most amazing sitting on the edge of my seat screaming at the computer chapters I have ever read. I Mean DAMN TAY! This is freaking amazing!!! And when Lonnie thought Nick was “Dead”... you don’t even want to know what was going through my mind, (:

I mean wow. Lmao I am so speechless it isn’t even funny.

IF YOU DON’T MAKE A THIRD I WILL DIE. :D :D :D oh you have to! Its Nonnie, we can’t just let it go!!!!

Gah. I love you for writing this. lmao not to be freaky at all. (: AMAZINGGGG. !!!!!!!

THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING NICK!
I cried when Lonnie was trying to save him, it was just so heartbreaking && when he was dead.
As always that was an AMAZING chapter :)
DO A THIRD STORY PLEASE!!!!!
You are truly an amazing writer, I only wish I was as good as you.
Update super soon please!!

ahhhhhhhhhhu thank god nick didnt die!!!!! i love this and you should DEFINITLEY make a third! you are such a good writer!

Ohkay. Be prepared because this is gonna be long. I have done nothing but sit in my room and read both parts of this story only stopping to get a total of 6 hours of sleep. I couldn't bare to stop. I'm engrossed with this story. When I first figured out the plot I thought for sure that I wasn't going to like it. But then as I read it was nothing, NOTHING, like I thought it was gonna be. I don't know what it was but something was pulling me into the story. I loved how crazy Lonnie was and I even learned to love the Nick that you portrayed him to be. During this whole story I was on a emotional roller coaster. Especially in the last few chapters. I've NEVER cried while reading but I guess there's a first for everything. And I hope and pray that this ISN'T the end for Nick and Lonnie. You need to come out with a triquel or whatever you want to call it. I am addicted and I'm proud to say that I am. I really hope you take this into consideration because I think I might die without Nick and Lonnie. Ohkay I know I'm getting carried away but still. You understand my point. This is one of the best stories EVER written. Writing is your talent.

OMG............FIRST Of ALL WHY THE HECK DID YOU STAB HIM?????I WA SOOOO FLABBERGASTEDTHEN YOU MADE IT SEEM LIKE HE WAS GONNA DIE I WAS SOOO GONNA CRY BUT I LOVED IT OVER ALL.

wow. That last chapter was intense. When Nick was stabbed, I swear my heart stopped. I'm definitely voting for a third installment!

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! That is all I can really say....WOW! That last chapter was INTENSE...I laughed, I cried, I yelled (in my head since babies are sleeping), I got pissed...I think went experienced every emotion that one can feel - in one chapter! I can't wait for the Epiloge...Wedding? Maybe? lol that would be an awesome epiloge. Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes...I want another Nonnie Story. You can't ever end it's the best...seriously. I'm a huge fan and I really want more!! Can't wait for the last chapter!!!

Taylor, I know I haven't been on here in a long time, and I haven't commented but you have really outdone yourself. That was amazing. And yes, it did get me to cry. You are an amazing writer and you really reach out to the readers and connect, which is a great thing. I can't wait for whatever else you have in store.

Well you sure do know how to provoke emotions out of me. I was on my toes the whole entire time!

I apologize for my lack of commenting Taylor, school as been seriously my top priority these past months, and I had absolutely no time to comment, but trust me I read every chapter when you updated, and they were all beyond amazing. Seriously, I wish I could comment on every chapter over again, and give you a in depth comment. But like I said that takes time, that SST isn't allowing me to have. lol.

Chapter 24....the fight scene....the first chapter you ever wrote that actually made me want to cry....

You should be proud of yourself, It takes a lot from a writer to make me cry, I have only cried at a story three or four times, out of the thousands of books I have read. So kudo's to you. :)

This chapter was so good, I don't really know where to begin. I mean the way you blended the Lonnie's dreams into a sort of reality; then telling showing us it was a dream caused by lucas, that really kept me on my toes through out the whole chapter, always wondering if that was a dream or whether it was actually happening. Really kept you in the story.

I LOVE Ryan and Russel, they are the bees and knees of the whole werewolf business :) apart from nick mind you. The way they show love towards Lonnie even though they barely know her is phenomenal. And how far they would go to protect her AND nick, even if that meant death, is also commendable. Plus they are two awesome dudes. Haha.

As for lucas...he surprised me in more ways then one. I had no clue that he could control Lonnie's emotions that way, I always had thought that her fear and pain was just her caused by all the stress and thinking to much, but never had I thought that Lucas was behind all of it! I all I knew was that he could mess with her head, making her see things that felt as though they were reality when they weren't. Really good job with this character Taylor, you made him sadistic, evil, desperate, a coward, and everything you would look for in a arch villain. :P

Lonnie has grown so much through out these two stories, from being that quiet shy girl who lost her mother at a tender age, to a girl who is fighting for the lives of others and telling men that she will "kick their ass". Total change, and I love it! her character has evolved so much that it is hard to put into words, let alone complete sentences. But I have noticed one thing with Lonnie, in every fight she doesn't think about what will benefit herself from winning it is always the person/s that she loves, for example in EOL she thought of all the pain of that her father had to go through when her mother died, every thing that every person around her felt because of that one man, and in LITS, she did the exact same thing. So I think her passion for others is what sparks her magic, not her love for Nick, but her passion to save others. THAT is what she was meant to do with her powers.

I laughed my socks off, at the end when she tackled Nick, and bombarded him with kisses; I laughed so hard...and their was also slight giggle-age, I can't lie about that. :) But I am thoroughly impressed with the character Lonnie, I have grown to love her far better then I did Minnie Mouse....well no I take that back, cause I have a huge soft spot for Monroe, so I guess the feelings for the two are mutual. :)

As for Nick...he could take a thousand years and not even be close to finishing. ha. He has changed SO MUCH since EOL. from "bad ass/ I don't want nothing to do with you" to "I can't live without you/ my light in the storm". Totally 360 here. And I am glad he did. Don't get me wrong Nick still carries along with him, some traits he began with in EOL, but the NEW traits he has just makes him all the more sexier. :) I love all your Nick's. Haha, that sounded weird....

Holding my head a little higher and my posture a little stronger, I exhaled a deep breath, my eyes burning straight back into him. “We’ll fight.”

I am LOVING this new found courage in Lonnie, something I thought I would never see in her. Nick is totally rubbing off on her, and I am so thinking he is digging it. lol.

“You’re a coward!” I shouted through tears I hadn’t known were there. “You’re… you’re such a coward that you have to hide behind all of this to get what you want.” I could see that ghostly hand snake forward, the fingers wrapping stiffly around my neck; this was all so familiar. “Wh-what’s the matter?” I choked out. I kicked my dangling feet as it raised me up, my eyes flickering to the fast moving wind, the twister-type thing waiting for me. “Afraid that I’ll beat you if you don’t have extra help?” I could feel him hesitate. I knew I had to keep talking. I learned this type of distraction from Nick. “Think you’re not strong enough?”
Totally had a Nick flash back at the first fight they had with Lucas, Total squeal mode, I was in. lol. See Taylor, you bring out the girlie side in me....I don't even know if that is good or not. Haha.

I was met with Jeremy spinning him around so his back was facing me. There was something in Jeremy’s eyes, an emotion just as strong as the sudden hatred I saw through Lucas, and his arm jerked in a short forward motion. I didn’t know what was happening, but Nick bent forward then, his whole body completely still. The silence still remained, even worse this time, and I had no clue if there was anyone but the three of us around.

I wanted so much to kill Jeremy for what he did. And I am glad you didn't kill off Nick, or you would have a really nasty long comment from me and a thousand other readers of yours, and even some that don't even read this story! No lie. I really hope Jeremy dies a long and painful death. I really do.

“Lonnie, you could hurt yourself!” Mr. Cornell warned as my glow sparked, creating a friction that made my body feel like I was being shaken.

I didn’t care.

My eyes were shut tight and I held my breath, the light headed feeling coming back at full force. I could feel myself wanting to pass out. I wanted to fall asleep so desperately, but I wouldn’t. Not without Nick. I felt bolts shoot through me, as if I were being electrocuted, but they were leaving my body instead, quickly flowing into Nick’s. And I cried.

I am genuinely curious, HOW hurt could Lonnie get, like pass out for a few hour, or like brink of death hurt? Yeah....cause I have seen Nick beaten up and broken and Lonnie healing him, but I have never seen Lonnie as beaten up as Nick and Nick being the one to nurse her, because their has to be something that only he can do that could save her, just like he feels what she feels, their has to be another special connection between the two that if Lonnie was in the same position as Nick, he could save her. Cause nobody could save Nick but her, what would happen if Lonnie was Nick...who would save her?

Beautiful Chapter Taylor, I hope this comment will suffice for all those I didn't comment on. Again sorry about that. :) Can not wait for the epilogue! Oh and Total YAY for sequel, I am curious what happened to Ciombra and Jeremy, I mean they both are power hungry, they both can't just walk away from the hunger/thirst just like that. So Yes, a lot of question need to be answered missy. SO TOTAL SEQUEL! :D

UPDATE SOON LOVE!

I LOVED that ending, it was perfect.
I think a thrid installment would be awesome !

OHMYGOSH!!! i cried during that chapter, just saying. and i was totally cussing you out when i found out nick was stabbed and he was lying on the ground dying :P but its all good now.
this is literally the best chapter, i think. amazing description and word usage. i loved it :]
as for the third story for Nonnie, you could do that. the only thing you probably should include is their wedding. if your planning on making the epilogue their wedding, then there shouldn't be a sequel. but thats just my opinion, which probably doesnt matter. so dont listen to me.
but i am expecting a wedding somehow or another ;] *hint hint*

Oh my gosh! I cried SOOOO hard when Nick died and I thought at first that you were going to kill him off. I was going to be reallly sad if you did. I loved this ending and seriously, how did you have the energy to type up over 10 thousand words??!!!! I loved the action and I'm glad that Lucas is dead. I don't know why, though, I thought of Harry Potter as I read the last chapter of this story you know with Harry and Voldemort? Hahaha! Well, as usual, I enjoyed this story from beginning to end. I cannot wait for the epilogue! Oh, and tell your best friend THANK YOU! Seriously, if it wasn't for her suggesting it, I would be soooooooooo sad right now. Thanks for updating. Please update again soon. I can't wait for the epilogue!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!
IM SPEECHLESSS
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
THERE TOGETHER AGAINN! ABSOLUTLY AMAZINGG AS USUAL(:

“And you remember how lonely and desperate you are when I kick your ass.”
BEST LINE EVER!
I cried from the part when Nick was stabbed until the end.
I want a third story! That would be so awesome!

Hun if u don't make a 3rd story i will have elves kidnap u in ur sleep!!!!! lol I loveeee what you're doing now, can't wait for more

That chapter was EPIC!
Loooved it <33

You should totally make a third! They still have to capture that nasty ass who got away D :

I'm tottaly glad you didn't kill Nick off -- if you did in that chapter;; you'd have some MAJOR explaining to do teh heh

<3

Peace. Love. Murder. Complicate.