Light in the Storm - Comments

Oh. My. Gosh. That was super intense from beginning to end! You had me leaning off my seat for more throughout the whole story. Gah! Thank goodness you were talked out of actually killing Nick off! I would have been crying, most likely. After Lonnie was working so hard to bring him back, I knew he'd wake up, but I was expecting a huge twist like Lonnie being too weak from kinda giving Nick her life force and quite possibly dying as Nick was revived. But thankfully you didn't do that. This chapter was powerful, I was tearing up a bit so I'm glad that there was a happy ending. Nick and Lonnie deserved a happy ending. :)

Basically, it was amazing. <3 just the way it should have ended. Now, let's talk sequel? haha.

Whoooops, that should have been *their wedding.
I'm such a horrible speller, oh my.

BEST. STORY. OF. MY. LIFE.
I like the way this ended :]
THANKS BAJEEBUS YOU DIDN'T KILL OFF NICK, I think I would have cried.
I defff felt emotion while I was reading this.
You're such an amazing writer, I hope you have intentions of becoming an author.
I realllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy want there to be a third story.... I don't want this to end.
I want to read about there wedding :D

....I'm eating laughing cow cheese and crackers right now.... it's yummy... just fyi... ;)
Can't wait for the epilogue! xoxo, Karlei

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I was ready to about kill you Taylor.
I thought you killed Nick. I was shaking and crying and hyperventilating! And worse my computer shutoff and refused to turn back on RIGHT as Jeremy stabbed him. I went into shock.
This was bloody BRILLIANT!! Such a justifiable end to a great series! Congrats because it was really amazing!
The description of all the pain, of the fight, of Nick. It was great. I saw it all clearly in my head and I felt like I was in a movie watching it.
I love Nonnie so so much and i'm so glad they're getting their happily ever after! So that's an absolute YES YES YES to threequel. Pretty please!!! :)
So I can't even express in words how much I loved that really... awesome job.
Please don't make me have to wait too long for the epilogue! I can't handle it :P

Happy Holidays!
.xoMar.

AHHH ! THIS WAS AMAZING! yess make a thrd story im absolutely in love with nonnie, i was even tearing up at the end :) pretty please!

This last chapter was amazing and probably the best ever. And my vote is definitely a yay to the the third story =)

This was uber-awesome!!!
THe length was just perfect for them and I was scared for a moment there that Nick wouldn't make it out alive, but when he did I was like YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
I'd love it if you did a third one as well, but it's your time and effort that goes into writing these stories, so it's your call.
I don't mind that it took you a while to write it, it's the end result that matters love.
I want someone like Nick.
Love the chapter and can't wait for the epilogue, even if it means that it's the end of Nonnie for a little bit.

all i can say is oh. my. goodness. this was like the best chapter, it was so amazing. I love how Lonnie saved Nick, that was so, ah, she's beast. haha.
and as for a third story, why not, I'll miss Nonnie, they are one of my favorite couples =]

I am literally jumping for joy here. *scream*

First thing first - I started reading this chapter and the moment she saw Nick I knew it was some evil work [I hate Lucas]!!! But I just couldn't stop reading, my eyes were an inch from my laptop and I was taking every word in! This was such an unbelieveable chapter.

And then they got to that cemetary, Lucas was there and I just wanted to jump into the story and beat him to pulp [yeah, I said it, I am such a dork].
Then Nick and that pathetic excuse for a human being, Jeremy, came and I was just so happy that Nick was finally there and when the fight began I knew that it was going to be something epic.

So, there they are fighting and all and Lonnie finally wins... I looked something like this :DDDD , though deep inside I knew you wouldn't let it be the very end, I was positive that something would happen to ruin my :DDDD happy face. Enter Jeremy, once again, huh? ... I congratulate you, though, because you have made me cry my eyes out once again. All I could think of was that you wouldn't let Nick die, it would be totally unfair, he's too awesome to be killed by someone like Jeremy, right? That's my humble opinion though.

The moment when they were all saying he was dead, but Lonnie already tried to revive him... then I was all like :((((((( "nooooooo..."
But then Nick was alive after all and they were together and I was just like :DDDDDDDDDDDD

So there you go. I could have written this more professional if I hadn't been under such influence of this very chapter.

I hope that there will be some more Nonnie for all of us after LITS, because I just love them. Especially Nick, then again when do I do not love Nick? Your writing has been improving ever since I found your stories on here, so that's my opinion. Your chapters have gotten more detailed and longer, and your chracters even more uniqe and worked out. I really do love your writing and you can consider yoursefl to be my favourite Jonas fan fics author. : )

What else, what else?

Oh, yeah... will you be updating Take Me There soon? Because I just love that story. I love Jules and Nick and miss them very much.

Once again - amazing chapter and keep up the good work.

- Maya : )

OH MY GOSH YOU JUST MADE ME CRY SO HARD! I think you are such a terrific writer that I think you should really publish your books. I would buy every one and every single copy!( That's a pinky promise)=] I think your writing has improved so much since the begining of EOL. I try to comment as much as I can so you know how much your writing means to me and all the people that are subscribed to your stories. I swear every time I get an update for one of your stories I get straight to a computer and read the whole thing twice. I know it seems a little freaky I just am addicted to your stories!! This chapter is so sad, but I knew you wouldn't let Nick die, that just doesn't seem like you. lol. But anyways I hope this comment shows that you are an amazing writer and I HOPE YOU MAKE A THIRD STORY TO THIS SAGA!!

xOxO- Lovehurts 14

I smiled, laughed, and cried. This chapter was sooo amazing and so well written and u should totally do a third just because I would mss Nonnie, and I'm sure u would too. Now all that needs to be updated is journey and then the world can start turning again.

omg i had many mised emotions in this chapter... i literally cried when i thought nick was dead... thank god for that person that talked you out of killing him off :) ... you don't understand the relief i felt when he came back to life ... about another sequal, i think you best leave it at two stories because what else can you out in after the wedding??? any way i loved this chapter and please post the epilogue asap :)

This was amazing, Im literaly speechless (like Mr. Jonas :)) YES to a 3 story. This is the only story on Mibba that I will actually wait a month for an update. I live off this story. If you made another one, I would LOVE IT. PLEASEEE!?!?!?! Your such an amazing writer, ever thought of journalism or a writer proffesion?

OKAY. I think I died. I got the email and I read this. It is now 2 in the morning. If someone saw me, they would think I am crazy. I am laying in my bed, crying like a crazy person. OH MY GOD. That was amazing. There was so much. I love you. That was just great! It was full of everything. I died. Thank you.

Hallelujah! I've waited for this story for long time! I completely love this story a lot!!! The last chapter was really touchy yet best! :D

I can't believe that this is really over for now. I'm honestly sad for it to get over. I wish you can continue to write one more sequel of this story. Why don't you write about their future child as a wolf and wizard/witch!? It's going to be awesome! It will be different point of view. Don't you think it's great? It's up to you. Please please don't give this story up. I really love this story.

I'm speechless and teary-eyed.
I can't even think of how to describe that...
All I can say is YAY for more Nonnie(:

The best thing I've ever read<3

OH MY GOSH.
Okay, well that was just the best chapter of my life okay?
I love Nick and Lonnie so much, I think this series is actually my favorite of yours. I've re-read it so many times so an obvious YES! to a sequel.
I want to see them get married and, oh god, Nick with little wolves and witches running around.
I can't wait for more, this story is truly amazing :]

So I am DEFINITELY crying as I type this out.....THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! Oh my GOSH, that was INCREDIBLE!!!! I cried when Lonnie was fighting, when that idiot stabbed Nick and then when she saved him. And now I'm crying because it's technically over and you mentioned me AGAIN.
You did an OUT-OF-THIS-WORLD job with this fight scene, even if I did have to force it out of you. :D
LUCAS IS DEAD!!!! YAYYYYY!!! Now go hunt down Jeremy and chop him up into itty bitty, teeny weeny pieces and feed him to the wolves. Okay, I'm done.....for now.
I can't wait for the third installment of Nonnie.....Most definitely a YAYYYY!!!

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!1
HUGSSSS!