Not Your Enemy - Comments

celestial_royalty (100)

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In chapter 8, it says "I am your best friend and yo" and cuts off there, which doesn't quite make sense. I loved the story and wrote a fairly detailed comment in the sequel. I can't wait for more~

June 7th, 2011 at 03:52pm

shaylove (100)

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OH MY GOD! THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING!

August 30th, 2010 at 02:27am

MamiEI4U (100)

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OMG so sad! I love it!... Update!!!!

August 4th, 2010 at 05:26am

WTFMusicPerson (210)

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*smacks you in your face* Stop getting me addicted to all of your stories and co-writes! ... jk about the smack but seriously it's like I turn around and BAM I'm addicted to a different one. That means you rock both of you =]

August 3rd, 2010 at 08:39pm

kaylynnjaeannxox (100)

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awwwe. :(

August 3rd, 2010 at 07:16pm

avenging angel (100)

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This chapter really made me cry...... :,( how you guys start to write on the next one soon......

July 31st, 2010 at 09:25pm

Liars' Pants On Fire (210)

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D: I can't believe it's over! Thank you both for writing this lovely story.

July 31st, 2010 at 07:53pm

pixiedusttt. (100)

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:'(
Stupid Cullens are making stupid decisions!
I bet when they come back they are going to be even more heartbroken because Tobi and Ruby moved on with other people!
YAY!
A SEQUEL! :D
Please update soon! <3<3<3

July 31st, 2010 at 04:31pm

PhoebenPaige (100)

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:*( they left

July 31st, 2010 at 05:17am

avenging angel (100)

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Is this he end of this part of the story?!?!? His chapter was good but sad.....:,(

July 31st, 2010 at 03:59am

pixiedusttt. (100)

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THEY JUST LEFT!
Now Tobi and Ruby aren't going to forgive them and they might move on!
Tobi with Paul
and
maybe Ruby with Grayson?
Please update soon! <3
I love this story :D

July 31st, 2010 at 02:27am

XxXBubblyGirlXxX (100)

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Stupid Paul!!!!! You know what would be sublime is if Tobi's power was that she could have little baby Jaspers as a vampire

July 30th, 2010 at 06:58pm

kaylynnjaeannxox (100)

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WHAT!
holy hell batman!@
loved it.

July 29th, 2010 at 06:42am

Rayn's Vengeance6661 (100)

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Woah hawt damn lol jasper n toby ;). Ooohhh toby is going to no that jasper went crazy vamp on bella n emmit wen t crazy vamp n ruby lolx wonder watz goin 2 happin :o

July 29th, 2010 at 06:34am

Fire and Ash. (100)

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Update Soon Please?!? XD

July 28th, 2010 at 12:14pm

Lion King (100)

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threw in the 4 boys, did you ;)
i think i know where this is going
from tobi's end :D

July 28th, 2010 at 07:36am

LatteIV (100)

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They kissed! I'm loving the twist as things get more complicated for Tobi. So much to bear! I think this chapter is one of my favorites. Update soon :)

July 28th, 2010 at 07:34am