Not Your Enemy - Comments

In chapter 8, it says "I am your best friend and yo" and cuts off there, which doesn't quite make sense. I loved the story and wrote a fairly detailed comment in the sequel. I can't wait for more~

OH MY GOD! THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING!

OMG so sad! I love it!... Update!!!!

*smacks you in your face* Stop getting me addicted to all of your stories and co-writes! ... jk about the smack but seriously it's like I turn around and BAM I'm addicted to a different one. That means you rock both of you =]

awwwe. :(

This chapter really made me cry...... :,( how you guys start to write on the next one soon......

D: I can't believe it's over! Thank you both for writing this lovely story.

:'(
Stupid Cullens are making stupid decisions!
I bet when they come back they are going to be even more heartbroken because Tobi and Ruby moved on with other people!
YAY!
A SEQUEL! :D
Please update soon! <3<3<3

:*( they left

Is this he end of this part of the story?!?!? His chapter was good but sad.....:,(

THEY JUST LEFT!
Now Tobi and Ruby aren't going to forgive them and they might move on!
Tobi with Paul
and
maybe Ruby with Grayson?
Please update soon! <3
I love this story :D

Stupid Paul!!!!! You know what would be sublime is if Tobi's power was that she could have little baby Jaspers as a vampire

WHAT!
holy hell batman!@
loved it.

Woah hawt damn lol jasper n toby ;). Ooohhh toby is going to no that jasper went crazy vamp on bella n emmit wen t crazy vamp n ruby lolx wonder watz goin 2 happin :o

Update Soon Please?!? XD

threw in the 4 boys, did you ;)
i think i know where this is going
from tobi's end :D

They kissed! I'm loving the twist as things get more complicated for Tobi. So much to bear! I think this chapter is one of my favorites. Update soon :)

Oh and I love how Jasper was totally insinuating that she could fuck Paul to have kids with him and he wouldn't care because he loved her.

Bella got a paper cut?

this is really great so far! cant wait for more of this!