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  • SlytherinJadey

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    Esmes island special? I loved the story and though it was funny as when ruby kneed paul in the nuts :D Keep up the good work xxx
    July 11th, 2010 at 02:18pm
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    somewhere special?
    somewhere special that'll make them miss school?!
    damn now I'm trying to figure out where they're going
    and fucking Paul had to kiss Ruby oh well!
    can't wait for the next one :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 08:31am
  • MamiEI4U

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    I love that she is so excited to miss school but not to go with him! j/k I know she loves both! LOVE the story! The kicking Paul in the balls part hilarious!
    July 11th, 2010 at 04:30am
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    I love that she is so excited to miss school but not to go with him! j/k I know she loves both! LOVE the story! The kicking Paul in the balls part hilarious!
    July 11th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • jaspersbiggestfan

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    aaaagghh i wish there was more already!! I love it!!! and want to read more.. Your an awesome writer!
    <3 Anna
    July 10th, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • SlytherinJadey

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    I really hope that Tobi and Paul dont end up together because I really like Jasper and Tobi's relationship. xxxx Still say I love the story though :D xxxx
    July 8th, 2010 at 02:08pm
  • B.JxLover

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    Paul really needs to get his feelings straight, but I can't say I don't love the drama
    i can't wait for more =)
    July 7th, 2010 at 06:04pm
  • LatteIV

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    Omg this is insane! So much tension and drama lol. It would be funny if Paul and Jasper fought over her like in Boys Before Flowers...cute little Korean drama. Update again soon :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 05:03pm
  • Rayn's Vengeance6661

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    omg im completely insane but i just LOVE the thought of paul loving her in an love love kind oif way hehe ;) oh we3ll kill me if i love drama xD cant wait till the next update :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 08:49am
  • kaylynnjaeannxox

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    oh snap. :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    OOO!! Paul and Tobi! :O Loving the idea of a love triangle. xx
    July 7th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Awesome! I can't wait for more so update soon please!
    July 7th, 2010 at 12:49am
  • LatteIV

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    I'm so glad she survived! My hear goes out to her, because I had a similar situation, without the burn :/
    Paul is so stupid xD Update again soon.. Love it!
    July 6th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    Lmao at paul thinking they had to cut her leg off xD and then Ruby calling him a dumbass. Really good chapter! thanks for the update xx
    July 6th, 2010 at 10:10pm
  • kaylynnjaeannxox

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    I'm beginning to think that Paul is in love with Tobi. lol
    loved the update
    July 6th, 2010 at 06:14pm
  • RocketShip...crashes

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    AWWW, I can't believe she can't dance anymore!!! That's really sad, but great story!! :)
    July 6th, 2010 at 05:32pm
  • SlytherinJadey

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    Awesome new chapter....God paul is such a boob :D x I cant wait for the lads to tell the girls what they are.
    July 6th, 2010 at 04:29pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Paul is such a dumbass.
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    July 6th, 2010 at 04:24pm
  • avenging angel

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    loved the chapter hope she makes it ......
    July 5th, 2010 at 06:23pm
  • MamiEI4U

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    So I am totally PMs -ing right now so the Tobi scene in the burning house & Jasper saving her made me Cry!!!!
    July 5th, 2010 at 04:39am
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