My Best Friend's Brother - Comments

Chapter 1
I really want to like this story but already I'm not sure I can I swear I'm not being a bitch just my honest thoughts here, but a whole hand full of Hydrocodon isn't going to make you pass out their an upper not a downer some people they can effect oddly and if mixed with Ibuprofin will usally know you out. But I grew up with a pill head and taking them by mouth would even take longer to take effect, because the pill has to take longer to get in to the blood stream and in to the brain.

Sorry about the above I guess if they each took a handful at once then it could maybe OD someone their age forgot I was reading about teens but it still would have took a while to work going though the mouth and would have upped them before the OD kicked in..

This story already has to have the most understanding parents in the world, like seriously these two kids just accidentlly OD, and you're going to take them on vacation? Again I swear not saying any of this to be a bitch I'm just giving my honest thoughts.

Chapter 2
Still really not okay with how these parents are being so dumb right now getting all this money and vacation yeah I get it their concerened and worried but thats when you take away all the doors get a lock cabnit and do bag searches when they come home no matter where they been.
So fare the most likeable person in the story for me is Luke he should be giving her hell, I find it odd though finding out he is younger but I give the mom points for not putting the two girls togather but is it really a smart idea having two teens not related be in a room togather this mom has me questiong her jusge meant a lot

My weakness is being kind to others ever when their un kind to me.

Chapter 3
Wow a week already that is crazy and while I said back in chapter 2 I like Luke but a week may be a little to much, I mean yeah She could have tried talking Cara out of it but if not then she would have just done it alone and may have taken more then just half, though I do believe our main girl is a bad influnce just from back story context.

I read a lot of these stories, and I have to say its kind of nice to see the brother addmitting at least the way its been done here that he has a crush on the girl instead of the girl oggling the boy from a far.

Yes I would stay up even later then that to make my readers happy if I had any and because I like to write when I do its like a therpy for me I'm currantally writing what will probably be more the one large comment for you and its after 4am

Chapter 4
Okay I'm sensing that Luke knows more then just saving the girls life when they OD when we came in to the story, and that makes me curious on just how bad and how long these two girls where pill heads and just how either of them quit cold turkey.

I like getting in to Lukes feelings but I really want to know more about how much he knows and why he hates her or atleast is pretending to hate her. Love her and Luke making up I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter I really one to see what the juicy stuff is before comment,
I put taco season on pretty much everything I eat!

Chapter 5
Okay so this is going to the last comment in this line of comments I find it wasier to do it in fives when there are so many. Oh wow she just dropped a big secret one I'm very very curious on.
Wow she spent a whole summer in a ward and that is a bit of a shock, Oh so thats how she also got clean, and wow I cant believe she felt like she was in Cara's shadow. Okay its killing me I have to ask how old are these kids because Luke is killing it in the compliment area right now.

Luke is kind of lying I mean sure his thoughts have changed some but I don't feel like he is telling the truth with Mel, right now after just one ralk with his sister that inst enough to take away

Biggest fear is that my neice and nephew even though they are away from it will turn out like the rest my family and be pill and drug uesers or make an attempt like I did because they couldn't handle not being good enough or not being able to stop what was going on.

Since this is finished I'll just do 6-20 all in one since you don't get three more comments on this one.

Much <3 Kat

Yay -wipes tears- soooo damn good

Lovedd that update!
And yess havinq to qo to my email to check fur a update is a pain in the butt! But sincee I'm justt soo Kooll wheneverr a story updates it sends a text to my phone tellinqq me! Lol.
Can't wait fur moree!

I freakin love this story and im so glad that shes goin back I really hope you make a sequel

I can picture it now hmmm she goes to their house. But Logan isn't there to greet he's in his damn room doing some thing stupid. And all hell breaks loose lmao I hope i'm partly right

Yess she's qoinq back! Moree sooonn.? Reall soon?!

She finnaly fucking admitted it praise ye jesus XD

Aw why not every day hmmph

Awwwwww I hope she does

Acctually I did expect mr luke to get ducked up. They neeeeeeeds toooooooooo beeeeeeeeee toooooooogether. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh XP

Nice updates. I hope you love us enough for another. lol. I can't wait for the sequeal even though it still is pretty far away. Thanks for letting me practically knew you updated. I can't wait to see what her mom says about moving.

Jebus mhrist I cry in my storys to lol crazy but when it's a sad chapter yep your gonna cry. :,( that was sad

Also read my story thanks Saved by a vampire! you'll like it

Yay I can't wait to see them

Absolutely love opps Adore this story. lol. I can't wait for the next update. I hope Melody and Luke can get Cara out of the drugs. I hope mom lives and Melody finally opens up to the idea of love. I really like this story. Your writing style got me emotionally attached to it. You're an amazing writer. I'll be reading!

:) good chapter

Aww
Poor Melody.
D':

heyy wow i really love this story its got me cryin lol keep posting :)

Awesome update she prayed to god. And she needs to tell Luke or well she might do something bad