June 3rd, 2010 at 08:50pm
Learning to Love June - Comments
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Love it!June 2nd, 2010 at 01:29am
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I'm really starting to like this <3June 1st, 2010 at 08:08am
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i love it. absolutely, positively, love it! you capture this certain aura that not many people are capable of, and it's amazing. please write more.June 1st, 2010 at 05:21am
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But no one cares about Kellan, who was out shined by his older brother in so many different ways. He's not as strong, as cute, or as outgoing. He's just Kellan. And for a moment I wonder if he ever feels the same way about Jeffery as I do about Jessica. Like he's just not good enough.
FAVORITE PART OF THE CHAPTER BY FAR.
This is really amazing, love.
<3May 31st, 2010 at 04:25pm -
Loved the update! Aw, so Kellan is introduced more in this chapter! :) And her sister is going out with his brother (which I presume is Joe Jonas, since that's Nick's brother in real life). Is that who Jeffery looks like? I just want to know so I know who to picture. :) Overall, loved the update, and can't wait for the next one! :) Please update soon! :DMay 31st, 2010 at 06:34am
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great so far :D keep writingMay 28th, 2010 at 02:24pm
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I love this! I love the way you described Jessica and June =]May 27th, 2010 at 01:33am
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Loved the update! I like how you gave insight to how she feels about things with her sister and her friend. It was sad though because she kept putting herself down, but I don't blame her. If my sister was like that I'd probably feel the same way. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! :D Update soon please! :DMay 27th, 2010 at 01:19am
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“Why didn’t you call me back?” Becky asks, sounding a little hurt. I know that she shouldn’t be, but I also know that Becky suffers from the worst case of self-consciousness that I know.
She needs to look in a mirror. (sigh) Look, no offense, but June is seriously down about everything. You spent over half the chapter talking about how she'll "never measure up to her sister". It got kind of repetitive, to be honest. I mean, I can totally see how she could feel lesser than her sister, that's normal and it happens to a lot of girls, but the way you wrote it...it kind of seemed like she was too down on herself, you know?
This is really good, though. You're an amazing writer :DMay 26th, 2010 at 11:24pm -
:D YES YES YES.May 26th, 2010 at 10:48pm
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this storyy is going to be ahhmazing i can feel it!!
i can't wait to see how this turns outt!
i love the way you brought in the enviness of sisters when one is blessed
with good looks and ones normal!!
thats sooo true i'm the sam way with my sis!!!
keep writing and i'll keep commenting!!
i pinky promise!!
*holds out pinky*
:)May 26th, 2010 at 10:40pm -
So let me just say how much I am in love with this.
This is truly amazing.
It's so original and refreshing.
Plus the layout is super pretty :) haha.
Please please please continue this.
I'll be subscribing and waiting anxiously for an update :)
Wishing you all the best always and forever,
Meghan Elizabeth;May 24th, 2010 at 12:51am -
So, I decided to check out this story since I'm reading your other one. I just read the prologue and I loved it, even if it wasn't that long. This story sounds like it will be interesting, and I can't wait for more! I can't wait to see what you have in store for it, so please update soon. :D You're an amazing writer! :DMay 24th, 2010 at 12:48am
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Kellan is played by Nick Jonas?
I'm going to get confused, ahaha.
Other than that, I just adore this prologue :DMay 24th, 2010 at 12:45am -
Woah that Kellan guy is kinda hot..have I seen him from somewhere?
Ahaha joking, joking(:
I love the first chapter, its a wonderful start, it kinda reminded me of how Nicholas Sparks would do a prologue.May 23rd, 2010 at 11:42pm -
oh my god. This is so good :)
OH OH. Good golly, amazing.
I'm speechless :)May 23rd, 2010 at 11:38pm -
So, I was wrong... It isn't Kellan from Twilight :(
But oh well! It will be amazing :D
Update this soon please.May 23rd, 2010 at 11:29pm -
this is so cute! i bet i'm going to fall in love with Kellan :)
i can't wait for the next update!May 23rd, 2010 at 11:29pm -
Dude I bet this story is gonna be another classic by you my love(:
I cannot wait for it.
AHH!May 23rd, 2010 at 10:59pm
it's great :D
you're such a good writer! (:
update again soon, please.