Between Two Lungs - Comments

I love this story, over already :'( I think that there should be a sequel :) haha <3 more soon babessss

I really love this story (:
i can't believe its almost done!

Nooooo
Not the end
xDD
You know what they say, I guess
All good things must come to an end.

Yay! Everyone's happy :]

Aww! I loved the Vero bit!

great update! glad she found a dress with Vero!

Those last few lines had me going Yumm, Jordan
xDD

More soon!

oh gosh,
i loooooooooooved this chapter!
:D

Loved Mae's dress.
I think the POV depends on the plot and how reliable you want the narrator to be

They are too cute :) Haha and awww, Vero was so sweet ;) :D :P I love this so much :) More!!!!!!!! ;) :D :P :) :D :P :) :D :P

I love Vero <3 I can'r wait to see what Jordan's rection to the dress will be =)

I think ur Sid story should be in first person...but that's just my opinon. I find writing in first person is easier than third lol.

AWWW Jordan is soo sweet!! I actually teared up a lil during that chapter. Can't wait to read more and I can't wait to see your Sidney story =)

Awhh Jordan<33
More!

I just found your story, and i sat down and read everything so far.
First i want to say , an amazing story, i love the plot and everything.
Second, I want to say thanks for writing it, i'm 16, used to be into that shit too(clean now :])
and just like mae , took one person to notice, changes your whole life around, didn't realize that till now, so thanks for that.
Can't wait for more!

I just found your story, and i sat down and read everything so far.
First i want to say , an amazing story, i love the plot and everything.
Second, I want to say thanks for writing it, i'm 16, used to into that shit too(clean now :])
and just like mae , took one person to notice, changes your whole life around, didn't realize that till now, so thanks for that.
Can't wait for more!

I just found your story, and i sat down and read everything so far.
First i want to say , an amazing story, i love the plot and everything.
Second, I want to say thanks for writing it, i'm 16, used toe into that shit too(clean now :])
and just like mae , took one person to notice, changes your whole life around, didn't realize that till now, so thanks for that.
Can't wait for more!

Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love this story. :) I'm excited that you already have it written out. :) That's what I'm trying to do, I just need to type it up haha ;) And Jordy is just too sweet. The last line of the chapter made me go awww :) I love this so much :) :) :) :D :D :D: P :P :P

aw I loved the last thing Jordan said to her! :)

Aww, it's awesome about her and Jordan. He's so sweet!
And I am intrigued about the promise of a Sidney Crosby story - I can't wait for that one!
More soon, please!

probably one of my favourite chapters.
im so happy for her!
and jordan's soo nice.