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  • LOVE1516

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    I'm going to say WHAT THE HELL! Your kidding? This is how it ends *faint* oh- I love books that are different and this definitely is, I mean I hate you, I love you, I hate you and it's over Bam adios? I can't handle it! He was such a meany! Grrrrr. But, i don't hate you, though.
    March 30th, 2013 at 08:48am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I love it! You should write a sequel about Pierce looking for Jill and apologizing to her and try to get back together! Update soon!
    June 21st, 2012 at 04:58pm
  • the-heartless97

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    Love it
    February 5th, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • MissCassy

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    I read this whole story today, I never wanted to stop, I was addicted. But like I said, you show me love & I'll show you some <3 :D
    December 27th, 2011 at 05:40am
  • Lady.V.

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    Sequel???
    October 19th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • lilly14

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    Sequel yeah????????
    September 3rd, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • lyricdagurl

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    sequel please
    August 7th, 2011 at 02:09am
  • koreanaddict96

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    I would really love you if you made a sequel!. (:
    Im sad that it ended that way but it was a nice evil twist. x)
    July 24th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • Lourin E. Hatton

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    sequel please
    July 17th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • Thingtastic

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    sorry I mean't Jillian
    July 12th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • Thingtastic

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    At first the story was good but you got me at chapter 8.
    He ABUSED her and RAPED her and then suddenly he loves her? Just because they had a baby they are madly in love? That doesn't make any sense! Has she forgotten that he practically destroyed her life?! It seemed like you skipped over a million feelings and reactions and suddenly jumped to how they would be engaged and how jullian wanted to know pierce so that she could 'love him more'. And its a wonder how none of the other characters are really reacting to how pierce raped julian who they love so much apparently. Sorry for the harsh criticism but I just don't see how this makes any sense.
    July 12th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • Demona_Dragonne

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    do a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 20th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • kill your friends;

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    okay...its official pierce is a douch bag and he needs to realize that jillian is the one for him!!!!
    June 14th, 2011 at 10:42pm
  • xxDarkerwaterxx

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    WHAT ITS OVER?????? NOOOOOO HES HORRIBLE HE CANT DO THAT TO HER!!!!!! REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!
    June 9th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    OhmygoodNESS! That made me so sad!!! Why did he do that at the end???!!! We need a sequel to find out why he did it & see if she'll be ok! 8-0 Please write a sequel, I'll luv you lots! <3<3<3<3
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:48am
  • dawn8279

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    I would love a sequal i want to know what happens
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:24am
  • Liddle-Vampire

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    more plz =]
    June 9th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • manduhhxplease

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    sequel sounds very nice!! :P
    June 9th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    I think he's black mailed to do that he wouldn't really tell her that.
    I mean he couldn't even look at her as she left.
    June 8th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • xxDarkerwaterxx

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    ahhh where is he she needs him?!?!?!?!
    haha awesome job keep writing i love it♥
    May 31st, 2011 at 01:47am
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