The Vampire Prince's New Slave - Comments

PLEAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE THIS STORRY IS COOL AND ............. I DEEDNT SEE ERRORS SO YEA 50 BAJILLION KOOL POINTS FOR BOTH OF YOU :)

Yay!!! Awesome chapter and You're really awesome for updating.

Well, I read it and it is an interesting story. But as hard as I tried I really couldn't get all the way into it. I like the plot of the story, but it felt like really rushed, I guess you could say. I mean in the first chapter, it goes from a homeless girl sitting at a park, a random guy, and then bam next chapter she's his slave, and now they are falling in love. I'm sorry as interesting as the plot is, the actual story seemed rushed. And I just can't get into it.

Maybe had there been some back story before she became his slave, I could, but I don't know.

Don't let my comment get you down, you have plenty of others who love it, so really you should probably just ignore this one.

Cute story i really enjoyed i cant wait to find out where that man went!!! cant take responsibility for his actions now can he? hahaha love the story

You should use spell check... But otherwise very interesting!

And you can add me as an author if you want help updating and if you want me to fix up and clean up the spelling and grammar errors...
I'm willing to help you...
:)
Authors oath.

I was kinda mad... It was filled with songs...
And one just so happens to be an 8 minute song...
-_-
but I shall wait...

Haha love the story and I know how that feels lol getting reported hella times I try to ignore it but I can't lol haha anyways can't wait for the next chapter update soon please :)

please keep going i really would like to know what is going on with pierce

I really like this. Keep writing!!!

please write more i love it

I love your story please don't stop writing it because some retarded person wants to cause drama

please update soon because you've got me wanting more!!

Love it! :)

Perirce got kidnapped by wolves or sumthin :0 I don't think he was liein pooooor he got kidnapped by the slutty bitch he used to go out with it just doesn't seem like him at all. Cause he loves her and she loves him no fucking way he would just leave. That or someone is threatening to kill her . I wonder

There also jealous that your story is amazing.... And EVERY ONE MAKE MISTAKES EVERY BOOK HAS THEM TRUST ME

YOU QUIT WRITING AND I WILL FUCKING KILL THE BUNNY.... Who cares about them reporting never stopped me... And they turned out to be a ten star story like yours don't quit.

The story itself is very good so far, unfortunatly, I can not continue to read it due to several typos....

This is an awesome story keep going please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fangs? Ok then. Good chapter! :) Update soon! :)