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  • lil_angel666

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    yea there r bucket loads of mistakes but I managed to desipher them

    anyway wats he gunna do to her????

    more must know!!!!!
    June 14th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • unholy

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    that girl is far to pretty too be homeless.
    June 14th, 2010 at 06:23am
  • lil_angel666

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    Cool story
    But i would have bitch slapped that boy if he had asked me to clean that room
    he-he
    more???
    June 8th, 2010 at 02:52pm
  • dawn8279

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    the story is good I suggest you either change the color you are typing in or change the background it is really hard to read when it goes over the moon
    June 6th, 2010 at 07:45pm
  • broman13

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    The story is interesting so far, but there are a lot of typos and stuff. It makes it hard to read, but besides that the story is good.
    May 29th, 2010 at 12:18am
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