So sorry I didn't comment sooner! Please don't give up on this. Will be looking forward to more updates. You set the scene for her to help him through this?? Can't wait to see what happens next.
this chapter was wonderful, i loved it and i'm not really sure why. everything about it just flowed nicely and the little parts with Gena, the old man and the credit cards just added to this chapter very nicely. great job
Hooray! Loved the update, loved "the moment". Great chapter, you're on a roll now! Can't wait for more, but certainly understand that your school stuff takes priority.