Hahahaha this chapter was just outright funny!!!!!! First the beach scene with zacky grabbing on to her boob to catching her in her towel!!!!! Great up date!!!! Hope you write more soon!!!
Please don't give up on this. I'm really looking forward to see where you take it, it has so much potential...and it's a ZV story!! Can't wait for an update.
I think the story is sweet. They are both in different times in their lives, Kali and Zacky just dont want to put out to much to soon. They are affraid of getting hurt. I like how Zack has those randommoments of being sweet and silly, andthen being his beautiful badass self. :)
I lovethe mattstory because its not a side you see in matt stories often.Hes usually this big strong care giver, usually playing the part of a brother or a mystery in disguise.
“Ahhh! Go away! Get out!”
“Stop looking at me you pervert!" This made me laugh the hardest seeing that they both were checking each other out.