Take a Sad Song and Make It Better - Comments

omg, im on ch 38. and i realized that rian, helped her after she got knocked down at the party when they went back to lutherville. and on the first day of school in lutherville rian was the one to help her. omg i love you guys.

I really loved this story, and I love the layout. I don't know how to do them, so if anybody is good at making layouts, could they please message me or something? :)

finished reading the whole story <3 so perfect , except the fact that alex & jade aren't together :'(

really cute chapter ! finally know where the nickname jazz came from (:

I haven't commented in a bit , but I shall now (:
holy jesus . alex & jade are actually the cutest thing ever & now I really want some guy to take me on the date that they went on , rain & everything plus cuddling after (: so fucking cute awwwwh

So happy I started reading this story ! I keep seeing people talking about it all over the comments on other stories & on alltimefanfiction ! I wasn't sure at first because usually I don't really like have two different pov's all the time but I really like it ! also I almost died laughing when jade figured out the guys are all time low & also i'm sorta confused why does jade call bailey jazz ?

“AND DON’T YOU EVER COME BACK AGAIN, YOU PIECE OF SHIT HORSEFLY!!” You girls owe me dry pants

xD

I finally caught up!!!!! I'm sooo sorry it took me this long but better late than never, right? My spring break is ending and I told myself I HAD to catch up before it ended and I finished the moment I woke up this morning!
Alright, now on with the story commenting part, lol. I don't remember where I left off when I fell of the face of the Mibbian world for a while so I'm just going to comment on the end as a whole. And I'm going to start that by saying, HOLY FUCK! Jade is really pissing me off! I know that she's afraid of who she's become in a way and I can practically feel her pain and uncertainty, but starting a fight at school, being proud of it, hurting your boyfriend and sister, and than just taking off without a word to anyone is NOT how to deal with it! I hope to God that in the sequel she learns she can't just run from everything that scares her. I want so badly for her to understand that those feelings she has for Alex aren't going to destroy her, they'll help make her because who she is isn't something she should want to change, she should embrace it because that's who you ARE. Change is scary but I can't help but think she's inflicting all this pain and complications on herself and it irritates me! I just want to grab her and slap her so hard and tell her what she's doing is wrong!
And Bailey! My God you have no idea how proud I am of her for finally standing up for herself and making decisions for HERSELF and not to please anyone else because this is HER life, not Jade's. Her "thing" with Zack is so cute! Lutherville did her well and I'm glad she's acknowledged that and accepted that.
The last chapter was soooo bittersweet! It stirred emotions within me that I can't even explain because those are the same thoughts I have when I think of graduation 2 years from now. You captured the uncertainty, the love, the promises, the happiness, the nostalgia, all of it so perfectly! You both are such talented writers and I'm so glad I got the opportunity to read this amazing story as you both wrote your hearts out into it. Don't ever stop writing and I honestly can't wait to go on to the sequel!

alright i wasn't going to comment until i finished this story altogether and today i finally finished it. i wanted to cry when i read the last chapter. that was one of the best stories i've ever read (and i don't just mean fanfiction) throughout the story, i could almost feel all the emotions that jade and bailey portrayed. i loved the characters and the drama and the storyline and just everything! you guys are amazing writers and i'm so excited to read the sequel! :D

I just read Chapter 55.
Fucking loved it.
Jade reminds me of myself, man.

I just read Chapter 55.
Fucking loved it.
Jade reminds me of myself, man.

Guys, you probobly wont read this this since there is a sequal and it is expected to comment on the sequel :S ?Well Ill comment on both and say this story is amazing. You are something and keep the good work.
P.s Amazing prob doesnt cover it but you guess went beyound and amazing.
You guys are the BESTTTTTT

THIS ENDING! OH MY GOD!!
must read/subscribe to sequel!!!

I had a chocolate POP TART it was amazing!!!!....

anyway lol I can't believe the story is over the final few chapters were really amazing I think in some ways jade needed to go to make some sense of her life but at the same time I kind of hate her for breaking Alex’s heart and leaving bailey all alone. I can't wait to find out what happens I’m going to go subscribe to the squeal right now :D

okay so I didn't read your author's note yet...idk if I even can w/o breaking down into tears.
OMG I can't believe it's over...and I can't believe I'm crying like an idiot! haha.
I'm not even joking....I have tears streaming down my face as I'm typing this. lol.
This story is just too amazing. I don't know what I would have done if there wasn't going to be a sequel.
What an amazing, heartfelt, memorable, sad ending to an incredible story.
I CANNOT WAIT to read the sequel!!!!! :D
<3 Kelsey

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I've only read the first chapter, but Hunny, I effing love this story!
You guys right welltogether and your both extremely good at it! (:

I'm fucking speechless!! That was really sad. Can't wait for the sequel <3

if I was Bailey
I wide been crying by the end if it
I feel like
I know what she's going through
abandoned
lonely
sad
heartbroken
T_T
make this happy again