Take a Sad Song and Make It Better - Comments

On my goodness!!! So I just finished reading your guys' whole story and I couldn't help but be reminded of what my English teacher told my class the other day; As readers we carry these backpacks and in these backpack we throw in detail that we pick up and think could be used to connect things later on in the story. There is nothing more annoying than lugging along details that, when you reach the end of the book, are never mentioned again. If at the end of the story you the reader find your backpack that was once filled, completely used, this is a sign of a good writer. You two are amazing writers, this story has my mind reeling with the amount of foreshadowing, symbolism and other literal devices used in it and I couldn't be happier. Not many other writers on this site can write with as much passion and talent as you two do in each chapter. So in ending I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter and the sequel!!

PS I am soooo happy the Packers won!!!!

I want to scream and rip my hair out right now

Great chapter. I can't believe Bailey's getting this opportunity but I have a feeling JAde's problems will hold her back. Update Soon.
P.S. GO STEELERS!! ;)

Whoa whoa,
Now I'm pretty sure that you have gotta update like right.
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NO!
THERE ARE NOT ONLY FOUR CHAPTERS LEFT!!!
NO!
I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT!

Anyway, I'm happy for Bailey.
SHE GOT INTO STANFORD!!
Well, was offered a spot at Stanford...
:DDDDDDD

wow great chapter update soon

What the fuck just happened with Jade?

I've always preferred Hollaback Boy as opposed to Girl *shrugs* Did you know that Gwen sued Cobra
over the song? lmao

I'm on pens and needles in anticipation of the next chapter, so you guys better update soon ok?

This story just gets better and better with each chapter!!!!!!
I can't believe they're only 4 chapters left!!! That's insane!!! haha.
I AM SO FREAKING HAPPY YOU GUYS ARE WRITING A SEQUEL :D :D :D :D
I am also happy that Bailey got offered a full ride to Stanford...that's so awesome!!
I don't know how you guys did it, but this story has just been layed out perfectly.
Everything just comes together so nicely...I just feel like it should be published. Not even joking.
I can't get enough of this. It's by far one of my favorite stories I have read on mibba.
And I am reading a lot of stories on here haha. 2 pages worth.

I also just want to say how proud I am of you two....when I first started reading this story it wasn't that popular, didn't have many comments or readers and now look! It's insane!! You guys def deserve it! This is nothing short of amazing and you continue to amaze me with your writing skills, character development, the plot, just everything with each chapter.
As I'm reading, I feel like I'm a part of the story. I know that may sound weird, but it's true.
It's so real..it's like I know these characters personally now. lol.
Well I'm going to stop ranting now haha.
I'm so freaking excited for the next chapter and the sequel!!! :D
<3 Kelsey

omggg only 4 :[[[ NOO. Sequel? THERE MUST BE.
Update soon please omgg i wonder whats going on with jade

OH MY GOD!
I'm truly in love with this story, its just so..OHMYGOD!
Well Anyway I'm new to the site and have been reading your story for a good three to four hours.
Oh and I have subscribed as well ;)

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i love your story guys! and my lists would be:
girls:
1 Cassadee Pope
2 Sierra Kusterbeck
3 Ashley Greene
4 Amy Lee
5 Kate Vogel
boys:
1Jack Barakat
2 Zack Merrick
3 Christofer Drew Ingle
4 Michael “Jersey” Moriarty
5 Jake Pitts
6 Andy Six
7 Kyle Surns
8 Oli Sykes
9 Trace Cyrus
10 Mason Muso(my prefered Muso boy)

What can i say? Bands and instruments are sexxxxxxxy!!!!!!!!!!!

Like I said before, if Jade leaves I'm....
I-I'm going do something you won't like.
D:

fucking
arggggh
can I like
slap some sense into Jade?
god dammit
BUT WHY THE FUCK WUD U STOP THERE
DAMMIT
I WANTED TO SEE THE TWO BIMBOS GET THEIR ASS WOOPED
COME ONNNNNNNNNNNN
DONT BE LIKE THT
XJSJSJJDBHDJSNSS
GO JADE GO
AND LOVE ALEX MORE!

I got a bad feeling about this...
But if Jade's gonna break up with Alex and goes back to Essex I'm gonna go after her and drag her ass back to Baltimore! So be warned!
So really should talk to Alex or Bailey about how she feels. Update soon please <3

Livvy...amazing chapter as always. :)
Congrats on winning that contest!!!!
I just really don't like the way Jade is acting right now lol. Alex has no idea what she is really feeling..hope he finds out soon.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
<3 Kelsey

good chapter update soon please

OH,
And Ryan Reynolds.
Yum on toast.

Orlando Bloom
Ashton Kutcher
Kennedy Brock
Will Smith

I agree.

But, also
John O'Callaghan
Alex O'Loughlin (the new Hawaii Five-O)
Matthew Grey Grubler (Criminal Minds)
Shemar Moore (also Criminal Minds)
and...just throwing it out there no matter how weird or awkward it is, especially since I don't really care for their music:
Will.i.am from the Black Eyed Peas.
DON'T JUDGE ME!!!

For girls, I only have a few.
Amanda Bynes
Juliet Simms
Jennifer Love Hewitt and
Jennifer Aniston.

It seems I have a thing for Jennifers...

ANYWAY ON THE THE STORY PART OF THE STORY COMMENT!!!

I SWEAR IF YOU HAVE JADE LEAVE I WILL PERSONALLY COME TO YOUR HOUSE AND LIKE.....
SET YOUR COMPUTER ON FIRE!
OR MAYBE STEAL YOUR PETS!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If you guys send them back to Essex I will cry my eyes out and then come and find you both and force you to change the story having them stay in Maryland! RAWR! So sad this is ending soon tho, but I can't wait for the sequal!

Hmm.... My top 10 guys would be:
1. Jack Barakat
2. Kyle Burns
3. Matt Fylzik
4. Jordan Witzigreuter
5. David Desrosiers
6. Gerard Butler
7. Zack Merrick
8. Synyster Gates
9. Zacky Vengeance
10. Luca and Diego Fainello (they are brothers so the count as one)