A Twist in My Story - Comments

Wow, I love this story so much. You definitely have a way with words. Update soon.

This story is going to be one of my new favorites. Obviously. Chapter one and already drama is going on. I can't believe she left him, BUT good for her! I think Kevin's going to need some time to get over this.

So sorry I took so long to comment this guys. I so can't wait to see what you two do with this. I'm liking all of the boy's story lines so far and I can sense a whole ton of drama, which I love. Great first chapter! I look forward to see what you both have in store for us :)

Loved the first chapter! I liked how you gave us a snippet of each of their lives to start it off. Aw, I feel bad for Danielle; Kevin seems like he's going to care about his work a lot more. But he moved for her, so I guess that says something. And aw, Joe. I feel bad for him too. I'm sure he'll find something he wants to do... Papa J really needs to get off his back. The only one that wasn't kind of sad was Nick. For now, anyways, who knows what you two have in mind? :P But woo! Nick's going to Penn State! That's awesome! (Haha, sorry, I'm a Pennsylvania girl, so can you blame me for cheering?) :)
Overall, great first chapter! I can't wait to see what all you have in store for this story. :) I'm sure that it's going to be amazing! :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

great start, i love how you see all threes guys individual personalities and not just the three of them as brothers. :) can't wait to see where you go with it!
Hopefully Kev doesnt get too consumed in his work, that never turns out good :/

Oh gosh. I loved that you finally posted snippets of the guys. I really for Joe and Danielle and the reverend's daughter. This has tons of potential!

Sounds like it's going to be a really good story to read. Can't wait until you post more.

Wow. This is going to be huge. I can tell. This is going to be one EPIC story.

Sounds amazing :)
Update soon!

Oh my gosh, this sounds like it's going to be amazing! I subscribed, and can't wait for this to start. I also can't wait to see what you two can come up with. :) So please post the first chapter soon! Can't wait for it! :D

OMG OMG OMG OMG you guys!!!!!! this looks absolutely incredible!!! ya'll are just so talented and creative. i can not wait for this to begin.