Tour With Me - Comments

update again soon! :D

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NAT'S GOING TO CHEAT!
WITH ALAN. I AM SO DEPRESSED RIGHT NOW.
POOR JUSTIN. I THINK WE NEED A POV FROM HIM.
and I guess this isn't the time for sexy time, hehe.

Always the best phrasing of words and explainations = )

Awe poor Nat. At first when she said that she didn't say anything, i was beyond mad. Seriosuly, it took him forever to confess his feelings, and when he finally does she doesn't say anything. She had no idea how hard that was for him.
But now, i understand her, since she didn't just walk away from him.
I guess i can't be mad at her for being so confused, still she should know by now that she's in love with him.
And i loved Sabrina's reaction. It was such a Sabrina thing.
That last sentence has me worried. Do you really have to add drama? Then again i do like it so...
Onward!!!!

lol update soon please

Super cute :] never fallen in love but I know they're the definition

HEEEEEY i made a page 25

THERE WE GO! *clap clap clap clap*
damn justin, i waited 3 chapters for this
you're so cute though
xD
oh natalie...if you react the wrong way i will throw you off a bridge
<3
update soon :D

HALLELUJAH!
Way to go Justin, I am smiling right now, it was so cute and adorable.
I can't wait to see how Nat will react to that, it better be good, or I'm gonna jump....
Off my bed, LOL.
I loved reading what she was thinking, about the love sick puppy.
This is great, pleeeeease make Natalie do something good, not bad.
Update sooon (:

ok now hurry up and write the next!!! lol jk (this chaptr was kinda short dont ya thank?)

ok now hurry up and write the next!!! lol jk (this chaptr was kinda short dont ya thank?)

omfghfhdhshashd finally!
I can't wait for Nat's reaction.
She better not hurt him and run away, but I'm scared that's what she'll do...

Cute speeeeeach !!

He said it! He finally said it! Soo cute!

FANTASTIC<3 love it!
what a moment!! daamn
I agree with Jess! Justin needs to tell her the way he feels ASAP!

nice update by the way ;)

update soon! :D

Omg that was soo good the kiss was great but justin needs to tell natalie how he feels!

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU *falls to the floor and twitches*
SOO..CLOSE...
dammit justin.
smh.
update soon :D

omg!!! plz write fast get on and just write dont even go in the chat just write!!!

I love this storrry(: update sooon?

I think that it was amazingly sneaky and funny that they snuck into the pool for a swim.
Justin was clearly trying to tell her that he was in love with her, AND HE SHOULD HAVE!!! Seriously, he really should have the moment was perfect. They had music, moonlite and ugh it was just perfect.
The effects that the kiss had on Natalie just proves that she feels the same way about Justin that he feels about her. Seriously, she was lightheaded, she had no air (love that song PS) and she practically had a heart attack.

She's in love with him and he's in love with her. They should just tell each other already.

Update soon please