Tour With Me - Comments

omg! how could Allan do that to her!!!! ugh Justin needs to come back and make it all better!

Holy Shiz! , what the hell.
Didnt see that one coming , justin should
beat his ass. How could he do that?
Update soon(:

omg loved the new chapter... when the sequel to this gonna come out?

oh.my.god.oh.my.god wow! i'm kind of speechless after that. again i love your writing..you drew me into this and left me wanting more...i can't wait for the next chapter :)

i saw that coming a mile away, it was so obvious ever since the argument before natalie went off with justin. tsk tsk, allan

I just re-read Dance With Me from the start, and Tour With Me up to this chapter.
I also read everyone's comments, and noticed how at first they were short comments.
Which blasted into paragraph's on how great this story is.
While reading the story, I have noticed change in Natalie throughout it all.
Like she has become softer, and not as hard/blunt towards people now, but there is still Natalie in there, which gives it a bit of an edge. And the relationship between Justin and Nat ceases to amaze me, it's cute and mushy, but holds tension, both good and bad. It captivates you in their world, and makes you take the place of Natalie, or makes you feel like you are there watching it all unfold in front of your eyes.

I love in Dance With Me, how you described Allan and Annabelle, you can also see change in them during Tour With Me. And with Annabelle I can't help but wonder if she has always been jealous of Natalie? Like in everything Nat does, Annabelle's reactions are never the best, but all builds for an interesting story. You're probably reading this going "ohmygosh this girl is a freak" but i get that a lot haha.

And and and, I think we need to hear or see from Dante or something? I miss the little cutie, and Maya!

Well this is all I can think of writing at the moment, and if there are like spelling mistakes in this comment, terribly sorry ;P

Update soon, you are doing an awesome job, and tbh this story has improved from the very start (grammar wise) I sound like a beeach, but yeah. I am glad I came across this story because it has become a favorite of mine, and everyday I always check my emails to see if there is an update :)
(obsessed much? the answer to that is yezzir)

Hahahhaha :)

omg i had no idea allan would kiss her! please update asap!

Drama, yay
:D

Hahhahaha Allan is a tool! ;P
That was very much so unexpected kinda in a way, but when you think about it, it is Allan after all.
Annabell is a jerk, bahha, Good save Natalie, good save.
This was a good chapter.
What's Nat gonna do ?
Update soon

i will post as much comments as we need till u put up the next poster:)

Oh no... he did NOT just kiss her!!! I actually kind of liked the dude for a while, every girl needs a guy best friend, but that just crossed the line!!!! Stupid, stupid, stupid Allen!!!! I kinda feel like punching him in the face, that and Annabell... she's a bitch! Anyways, update soon please! I loved the chapter! =) <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

NO WAY! omg Alan is such an asshole :I
I hate him now! more than ever. He just had to appear and ruin everything? pshh stupid.
but Natalie didn't kiss him back...did she? oh crap.
Justin NEEDS to do something :( before Alan gets in the way and screw everything (more than he already did)

My heart kinda sped up when I was reading this, it made me sad because I now hate Alan for liking Nat.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO he's going to ruin anything!
And when Nat was grinding on all of the guys I was like 'ahhhhhhhhhhh what's Justin gonna say?'
It would totally break my heart if he was grinding on some girl..
I love the drama, btw. :D

Uh-Oh pretty crazy chapter! The drama starts! Awsome job.

this was a good chapter Natalie needs to get out and clear head but i think she really does love Justin

Aww, Justin :(
I hope Nat works this out.
Good chapter, and the way you described the girls was... gorgeous :)
Hope you feel all better soon (:
Update :D

poor Justin! he must be feeling like crap :I Natalie needs to get things fixed!!!

hahahah nice chapter (48) tho :P I love it when you put Polyvore sets :D makes it more interesting

uh oh...I'm worried about what's going to happen

update soon please

This was a good chapter, the end was cute. Totally love that Ryan is putting the moves on Sabrina. Feel better soon!

She didn't say it back, awh poor Justin
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