Bring It On Home To Me - Comments

Can I tell you once more than I am super upset that this "sequel" is only a 3 parter. I'm so addicted to this story, I'm not even sure I fathom it correctly, let alone could explain it to someone else accurately. I am so highly addicted to your writing, I can honestly say that it doesn't happen this often. But your writing is so damn captivating.

As I told you before, I like to comment after stories are finished, so I can analyze the story as a whole, as well as pinpoint actual chapters. Well, I can't help but share how I feel about your writing with you.

Your writing actually takes me into Annette's head, and a lot of Authors, myself included, can't always capture our characters accurately 100% of the time, or write such a long, story, in bits and pieces, and stay dedicted to events that happened in the beginning. Being able to keep the events and characters flowing nicely together, with congruency, makes this so phenomenal.

I cannot wait until there is a 3rd installment, and I PRAY that there is a real sequel to this, because I will be highly depressed if not.

Post soon =]

LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH<33
Alex is such a sweetheart and the whole story is going great!
lovee youuu ,
xoxo .
Sophia

love love love love love love love love love love

I was so pleasantly surprised for more Annette/Alex fun. XD
Excited for the second, as well, though.
Of course. :)
~Chelsea~

OMG! Thomas's out of the closet!
LOVEEE IT!
Im happy Net's finally with her family and everything (:
Alex and her are so damn cuteeee <3!

Just like Dedication, I love this one too.
It's cute how clingy Alex seems to be. Hahahaha
Which brings me to the question...when is the ACTUAL sequel coming out?
Soon, I hope.

Anyway, I tried to delete Dedication from my subscription list, because it's over, you know? But I couldn't do it because I was so attached...THIS IS WHAT YOUR STORY DOES TO MEEEEEE!!!

Anyway, update update update.

:D :D :D :D :D :D XD XD XD XD
i was smiling the whole entire time during this :D
my face started to hurt but it was worth it
and now im still smiling :D
that juat made my day :D
i knew Tomas was gay!! i just knew it!!!!
i CAN NOT wait untill you update!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D

AHH this story kicks my ass.
First of all, I'm happy to finally hear about Oliver, 'cause, well, you know....I already knew about Tomas's sexual preference ;) He seems like a good guy, and it's great that Tomas is able to finally be open about his relationship with him too.

Also...I kind of maybe laughed hysterically almost a little bit at the part where Annette said, "So does that mean someone in our family finally understands Lady Gaga?" PRICELESS!

RENT is one of the best freakin' musicals of ALL TIME! I was so happy you wrote about that; really, it kind of just made my day.

It's cute that Alex wanted to fly up to meet with her on such short notice; it's nice to finally be able to get a chance to see how they interact as a couple, rather than tourmates who always end up getting pissed at each other haha. And the room situation sounds really scandalous...I smell sex! (and candy, yeah, mhmmmm.... Remember Marcy Playground? '90s band? No? Okay.)

Anywhozles, I'm really excited to read the next chapter of this; I'm so freakin' happy you made it a three-shot instead of a one-shot! This mini series is going to be great, obviously, and I'm still (im)patiently waiting for Time Hasn't Told Anyone Else Yet! :D

PS. In case you forgot, you need to PM me tomorrow about Dedication! I'm actually really interested! :D

YAY!!!! Tomas is out. I was shocked but, I wasn't, if that makes sense. I have a weakness for gay boys, they are so adorable, the sweetest guys you can find, and the best friends/ shopping buddies.

I really love the dialog in this chapter, actually in all of the story I love it. You are such a creative and fascinating writer, it always amazes me what you come up with. It's witty, hilarious, and most of all realistic. Throughout the whole story, none of the characters personalities changed (with the exception of Kal), everyone says the same things they would in the beginning, at the end. Yes, the characters have grown and matured, but you manage to keep them true.

I like that Alex is coming to visit, I find it adorable and sweet. Even though they just started to have a real relationship, it is obvious that they have a strong connection. I love their relationship and loved to watch the ups and downs of it.

I LOVE this story, it has been my favorite since I began to read it, and reading everything you had wrote up to that point in three days. It was fun to see the story, characters, and you grow as a writer.

P.S. This would have been a good comment for the last chapter, haha, oops. (:

This was soo good I can't wait for the next twoo chapterrss :)
ohh Tomas<33
andd "He chuckled again, then changed the subject rather abruptly, “So, Jack is convinced he could be a kicker for the Ravens…” <----- BEST VIDEO EVER !
loveess xoxo,
Sophia

Damn
Tommy boy over reacted a little bit didn't he
and how could net mis that
I figured that out the first time he talked
I honestly thought net knew
anyway I loved it
I can't wait to read the next two chapters

Oh boy love this already!
And is that a little bit of STD i spot in the end there;-)

I can't say that I am not disappointed that this isn't the sequel, but damn am I excited none the less.

I truly loved the chapter. Your writing amazes me. I cannot wait until the next part is up (which I believe should be now, but I doubt that it will happen as such).

awesome starting!!! cant wait for more!

BAHHHH.

He chuckled again, then changed the subject rather abruptly, “So, Jack is convinced he could be a kicker for the Ravens…”

DVD REFERANCE. DVD REFERANCE!! :D
I seriously fucking adore you, you little amazing, beautiful writer, you.
:D
And now I'm going to go brag to my friend that I read the next part before her (: *runs away screaming like a little child*

Yaaay for Tomas! Hehe wasn't a shock for me...I found out before hand *evil look*

Mwahahaha.

Anywho.

Loved the first chapter.

So excited that they're together and that you are still continuing your writing!

Can not wait for more!

<3

YAY TOMAS!!!
As you probably know, I have a soft spot for fictional and real gay boys. I think it's the fact that they're honest and for the most part, great shopping buddies :)

Anywho, I thought this chapter was the bees knees. It's great to see Net's relationship with her parents. Although it sucks that Kal's parents aren't there for her, but it's pretty sweet how the Vaders are so welcoming.

Then there's Alex.
It's lovely how he and Annette have transitioned into their relationship. While there wasn't any physical contact in this chapter, their phone conversation was more than enough to tide me over. I'm not sure how to describe it, but their banter just fantastic. It's obvious that they care about each other, but it never gets too sappy. Me gusta :)

W00T! loved it. <3

Tomas being gay is shocking but at the same time it makes sense... kinda?
William Beckett has been known to make those straight boys go gay... what? :)
Their family is amazing... I'm kinda envious
1 down 3 to go :)

A. I want to be best friends with Net. I fucking love her!!! B. Tomas is gay. That is sooo awesome. The Lady Gaga thing... Brilliant. C. I love how Alex is still nervous with Net, and she with him. Its cute. I cant wait to see what happens with them sharing a bed. Sexual frustration much? D. I love the family dynamic with all the kids and Net's parents. E thru Z. Hurry up the the next installment!!!! <3^10 to you as well!!!!!