September 24th, 2010 at 09:10am
AHHHHHHHHH
Tori, I can't believe this is over :( hahah
But it was the sweetest story. You had an amazing original story line and an exceptional talent at all of your characterisation, which really means that it was another one of your brilliant master pieces :)
Although I missed reading about dear Jack, you did an excellent job with Zachary in this one, and I can honestly say this is the only Zack story I have read from start to finish :):) soo double yays are in order, and you should feel incredibly proud :):)
Your chapters were filled with extremely realistic and everyday common feelings and emotions, and it was the simple things that really made this story so easy to connect with, it was perfect.
I loved it very much, and although I am going to miss this now it is finished, I can't wait for you to get started on Disconnected :)
Thank you for always giving me shout outs and being such an amazing writer,
I'll be reading your stuff until the end! haha
<3 love jadeeee,
xo
And again, I KNOW i'm late on commenting. I feel like a jerk.
But wow, seriously loved that ending. I really didn't expect it
:]