Awhhh yeah that is kind of sad. But I can just tell this story is going to be amazing, seriously! I love how it wasn't typical, like Zack didn't all of a sudden think she was amazing and want to get to know here and how Grayson had absolutely no interest in the guys, for the most part.
awwww don't worry it makes me said as well. It's weird reading about Jack and Mallory is no where in sight! =( However, chapter 3 was great and can't wait to continue reading and finding out more. Zack doesn't seem to like her very much lol. And i LOL at the part when Jack clapped his hands together excitedly after Grayson took the IV out of his arm haha. I could totally see him doing something like that! I <3 him.
Yay! Another update. So I'm guessing you're going to keep me on my toes like king of empty promises. By the way, maybe Mallory could make an appearance...just a suggestion or was that your way of hinting she might come out haha.
Well now i know that they are sisters! yay haha. and i'm guessing the guy that was laughing was Zack and the one that fell off the board was Jack b/c i could totally see him doing something like that! although i don't picture him as the surfer type so i have no clue if that's right or not! lol =) Great chapter. Can't wait to read more! =)
Well im guessing that the guy laughing was zack in all his bulging bicept glory. The one who fell was probably either jack or alex im guessing. And i was also confused as to how they were related but this chapter cleared it up thanks!
Yay! Well it looks like i'm stealing this stories virginity! lol =) I loved it..i'm just confused as to how they are related but i guess i'll find out later in the story haha
unless you just want to tell me yourself? =) haha no jk. well chapter 1 was really good and i'm looking foward to reading more! it seems like it's going to be a good story!