California Girl's - Comments

California Girls I'm in love with! I love this story alot. :) I don't like that guy who hit on her and I miss zack! All in all Keep it up :) you'r amazing.

I sense trouble with the man who hit on her! aaahhh:P or amybe I look into everything too muhc haha

uhoh, I miss zack too!
haha
more :D
can't wait to see what happens in three days

I'm Pissed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mibba did NOT email me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I mean, I usually check anyway, but this time I didn't and I was only gonna sign on if i saw the email for this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!
Nice update.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Grayson and Zack are so sweet!
Why can't Zack come home a little early???????
And Annabelle is way too cute!!!!!
Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Three more days."
That was THE best ending... haha well I thought it was sweet anyway.
But YAY three more days until they are reunited :)

This chapter made me smile really big haha, not at first though, it was kind of sad to be honest, but when Annabelle asked Grayson to go to the beach with her was when I was like, "aww sisterly love." haha. Although it's gay that the guys have left, it's good that the girl's relationship is still going well, and I'm sure that Annabelle was only mucking up because the boys were gone and she was sad.

I think the part that made me laugh was definitely the whole
"Did he hit on you?" bit, I thought that was hilarious coming from a kid haha.

And yay for Paramoreee (L) haha, and although I am devastated that you won't be able to update, have a good time at Virginia Beach with the family and thanks for the mention lovely,
:)

ps; I got the email this time... obviously, haha. I was treacherously excited as well haha

Wow you really only got one comment? I'm sorry but you deserve way better than that! I apologize for not commenting on the last chapter. I understand the feeling though because i only got a couple comments on chapter 15 as well. It upsets me because it says i have 98 readers and i only have 25 comments..i don't really understand that.

Anyways, enough about my story and on to yours! It made me really sad when Annabelle and Grayson were sad about the guys not being there. I love how Annabelle is so attached to them...it's adorable! :) I'm happy that they don't have to wait much longer to see them again and have i ever mentioned that i absolutley love Zack and Grayson together?! Because i do! I could picture the whole scene when they were talking on the phone together..they're a very cute couple!
I can't wait for another update!
p.s. i am so glad Grayson rejected that guy! Go Grayson! lol. Anyways, have fun in Virginia Beach! :)
<3 Kelsey

"Did he hit on you?" baha I imagine Anabelle as the cute obnoxious girl from sitcoms past. I don't know though I'd throw that out there. Aren't Lexi and Jacky awesome influences!?!?

Anyways, I would have commented on the last chapter but I didn't get the email thingy until the current chapter. Stupid emails.

Aww. They're soo cute. Just saying.

Sad that it's coming to an end. All good things must come to an end I suppose. Sorry for going all cliche.

ahhhh i think i missed an update!
but i caught up! xD
awwwwww they miss each other! so cute!

*shitfull; a word that just popped into my head. meaning; to be acting like a little shit hahah :)

Okay, that is it! I didn't get a notification for this chapter either!!
So I unsubscribed and resubscribed and I better get an email next update, of course there will only be one way to test that out... to follow this chapter with a brilliant other :)
hahaha oh my slyness. But it is true about the email thing, I wouldn't have known if you didn't mention you updated in the story comment you just sent me :) (so thank you for both the update and the comment :) )
Now to the chapter :

This was terribly sweet, a trip to New York, and they did it for the first time hahah.
it. I must say I was kind of laughing when I read it because I've got Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince playing in the back ground while I was reading and it was the bit where Malfoy is like dying in the bathroom and I was like... 'well this is awkward' hahaha :)
But nonetheless, aww :)

And the goodbye exchange (L)
Jack and Alex are deviously shitfull* hahaha :)
but when Annabelle said the whole brother in law thing I was like AWWWW
and then I read Zack's reaction and I was like, oh shit.
But then I realised he was just a bit confused and I thought it was so sweet how he was all 'someday'
that was cute :)

ahhh, so all in all,
another beautifully written chapter, and I can't wait for the next as per usual :):)

Okay, okay, okay.
Words cannot express to you how utterly irritated I am right now.
And just to get the facts straight, my irritation has nothing at all to do with the occurrences in your utterly BRILLIANT story updates, just with the plain fact that I didn't receive e-mails to tell me that you updated this masterpiece, and I have missed out on so much!
And now that I had to read two in one go, I'm afraid I'm going to forget to add some of my thoughts on your amazing updates, because there are just way too many!
haha

First off, WOW at Zack's reaction to Paige. I was all
'YOU GO GIRL!' hahaha but then I was like, 'No wait, you're a boy... But still....'
hahah he totally told her where to go and I LOVED it. Amazing haha.
I kind of thought that at least one of the guys would have went after Graciee though, so I was temporarily like, 'Uh, hello, someone go after her!' but it was all made okay at the end with Alex and Jack's add ons to Zack's speech. I laughed.

Then with the whole Grayson telling Zack to get out...
I can't pinpoint my thoughts, I was kind of on the fence. A part of me was all
'Damn straight you tell him to get out after what he did.' but then the other part of me was all
'Aww Zacky.'

:) and a bit of a side note; I loved Flyzik being so concerned about Annabelle being asleep and that they were going to wake her. It was a small cute moment haha

NEXT CHAPTER:
Major aww at Grayson and Annabelle's newly formed relationship, with the whole 'munchkin' thing and stuff. I'm so happy that Gray finally is connecting with her sister and taking into consideration that she's still only young and she doesn't understand completely, and not getting frustrated. I personally think they make the cutest little form of a family.

Then the whole Zack and Grayson moment made me aww so hard. It was so sweet, with the whole 'I love you' s and stuff. Usually I can be a bit; 'Yes, we all get it, you're in love, shut up now.' kind of thing, but in your stories, you have such a good way of writing it that I don't mind at ALL. You don't over do it, and therefore I love it :)

In summary:
haha, I loved the updatess and I hope you update again soon :)

d'awwwwwwww.
cute cute cute, so much fluffiness!
and Zack was all flustered....
;]

Aww. They said those 3 words. *applauds*

It seems that the relationship between her sister and her and the relationship with Zack kind of sort of mimic each other. Very cool.

Ha the thing at the club was funny. Yeah what he said. I busted out laughing. Which was awkward because my family didn't understand why. Baha

Anyways super corny momment between the two, but in a good way like I need to find me guy like that to have a moment like that. *Sighs* If only they existed. Haha

It feels bittersweet. Sad that it's finishing, but it feels like the time is coming for the end. Wouldn't want the story to drag on like other stories because then it becomes ridiculous.

Until the next update.

Aww!!! Yay!!:D

I'm glad she forgave him! :)

This chapter made me smile. Like a real one, with teeth and everything! haha
I'm happy that Zack and G are back together!
And they love each other AWWWWWW :)

awwwwww yay theyre all better!
<3

Awww! I could Zack for that! but at least he told paige off and didn't take forever to go after Grayson!! I hope she forgives him:/

Grrrrrr, again.
This time @ Grayson!! Call Him!!!!!
C-a-l-l h-i-m!!!!!!
Or he should call her!! Whichever!!!! Some calling should go on!!!!!!
UPDATEEEEE!!!!!!!!! :-P

Calllll zack!
or he should call grayson!
I don't know but I hope things get fixed! lol :)