California Girl's - Comments

Haha Go Zack!
And Grayson, just give in and tell him it's okay. Trust me
;]

I’m proud of Zack for telling that bitch off!! she had that coming for a looooooooong time!
Gah i hope Zack and Grayson make up!
This chapter was great

Holy flying shit.
Zack is a fuck up.
He better find a good 'fucking' way to make it up to her.
;D

I realized that i forgot to comment on chapter 16!!! haha.
I hate Paige! Ugh. It seems as if Zack got himself into a mess but he was only trying to protect Grayson. I guess she didn't realize that.
I agree with jadeeee....obviousley, from what went down, Zack isn't over her yet.
I cannot wait for your Jack story!!!! I miss them...a lot! :) have u come up with any ideas yet?

Grrrrrrrrrrr.......................
I'll jump in dis story 4 Paige and she wont like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hiyah!!!! (karate chop)
And what the H-E-Double hockey sticks is wrong with Zack!!!!! I'll injure him too!!!!!!!
(Great update btw. More pleeaseeee!)

ARGHHH! I hate Paige!
What the hell, nooo haha
Why'd he have to be such a dick? He was so into Grayson, and then he saw that whore and he became an idiot. He should have been happy he was with Grayson, he shouldn't have given a shit if she was there, he should have either been modestly shoving it in Paige's face that he doesn't give a shit about her and that he likes Grayson and that Paige can't get to him anymore, or he should have been ignoring her all together. Obviously he's still not over her completely yet :|
This distresses me :(
However the fact that there's more than five chapters left does not :)
Keep up the solid effort at being amazing, and update soon :)

Whaaaaaaaaaa?!
No, damnit Paige!
:o

And I'm soo psyched that there will be more then five chapters

Damn that Paige!
ughhhh
lol

Oh no he didn't *Snaps fingers*

Aww poor Grayson. She's a scrappy one. She kind of was about to get all gangster on Paige. Would have loved to see that. Shucks. Zack is such a fun sucker! :p

Grr mad at Zack and I hate being mad at him. *pulls hair* :(

As for Paige, one word: karma. I heard it's a bigger biotch than anyone can be. *snaps fingers*

oh hell No!
zack did not just protect that stupid bitch!! D=<
god i hate her more now!

Zack just turned into a d-bag. No good!

great update((: keep it up haha

Loved itttttt! <3

Only five more left?!?! Man!
But I believe whatever you write next will be great and I cannot wait to read!

noooo, don't end it!
hahah
oh, and the tour problems begin i guess ;)
that was a nice little encounter they had at the airport upon Zack's arrival, and the thing with the fans was also another valid thing to bring into the equation as well, showing her nerves about the situation :)
update soon lovely :)

So I know I started reading this late in the game, but I can't rant and rave enough about this story.
I adore it :D

Awh 5 more chapters?! I'm gonna miss this story.
But yeah Jack sounds good!
;D

awwww very cute chapter! :)
i miss reading about jack as well!! You portray him so well in your Jack stories. (i hope that made sense haha)
I will definitley look forward to that!!
and i've said this before but i'll say it again, Zack and Grayson are SUCH A CUTE COUPLE!! I love them together!!

i agree i miss reading about jack. 3and i miss seeing him in concert and meeting him after every show that they have played here since the believers never die part deux tour.