I love this! I have to disagree with the person above me. I actually think Nando looks a lot better with his hair short, makes him look a lot younger! Keep writing!!x
So I read through your story and I have to say I really like it. And against most everyone else who reads it I like Cristiano. His smile (not smirk) is beautiful, and Nando had to go and cut all his hair off =(
So the whole Sergio drunk part had me laughing in bed at one in the morning. I bet that would be a sight! But stupid Nando! What the hell does he think he's doing? And Karmen going to Cristiano, I don't see anything good coming from that one. She knows she belongs with Nando so she just needs to forget about Cris. I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next!
OMFG. This story- what even? They're like small children, only...not small, and drunk. Oh my damn- Sergio. I cannot form words to describe my love for this story. BUT NOT CRIS. Whyyyy is heee everywheree?! Why can't he go sit in his room and sulk for the rest of the story?! WHYYY??? He just shows up at the times where she's most likely to do him. I wish Sergio would just punch him in the hair.
IT WAS AWESOME!:-D - but i don't like Cristiano, at all, well anyway, so she should be with Nando! His the answer to anything!:-D - well, keep it up, don't let us wait too long for the next update!:-D
OMG :) I bloody loved it :) I love the relationship between Addison and karmen. Anyway I don't really like drunk fernando ( but drunk sergio is a other matter lol:) I hope she doesn't do anything stupid
Omg that was a hilarious chapter. Sergio and Fernando getting drunk. Sergio does seem like he would be a handful when he drunk. lol Oh no don't fall into the evil hands of Cristiano Karmen it's like a huge warning sign
i'm so happy that i helped you out on this chapter. lol. i love starting drama... in stories that is. i laughed so hard at sergio singing pintame. oh dear kaka, i want to see this in real life. verdad? i'm such a genius helping you put some funny and some drama into that MARAVILLOSO chapter!
i'm so happy that i helped you out on this chapter. lol. i love starting drama... in stories that is. i laughed so hard at sergio singing pintame. oh dear kaka, i want to see this in real life. verdad? i'm such a genius helping you put some funny and some drama into that MARAVILLOSO chapter!
I love this, I love how you depicted Cristiano in here, but my heart belongs to Fernando, so I'm rooting on his side haha. I'm going to be reading this all night or at least until I catch up haha.
Ahhh! Finally some action! :) Lol. Amazing! I just hope that she can move on from Cristiano and fully commit herself to Nando. I love that he cares for Karmen so much, so sweet.
I seriously thought Cristiano was the one who scared Karmen. lol Thank God it was Nando. Finally we get to know what Fernando said to Cristiano on the pitch. Can't wait for more