Ronaldo needs a wake up call. Karmen, is OVER him. But if his persistence is what keeps the story going keep doing it! Love the story, and can't wait for more!
I love that chapter so much drama. I like Ronaldo but I love Torres even more. lol I mean I give Ronaldo credit for raising a baby as a single parent even though he chose to. I can't wait for the next chapter. So exciting!
I guess Sergio showed Ronaldo! That definitely didn't disappoint! Though if I had been Karmen I probably would have cheered on Sergio and Nando. :) I really, really hope she realizes that she shouldn't be wasting her time thinking about Cristiano because Nando's standing right in front of her for crying out loud! I would have no problem to see a little action between the two of them but then again who wouldn't mind that? Can't wait to read more and see what happens next!
The layout super sex. I like it a lot. Cristiano is such a bitchfaced queen. Like...Jesus, calm down, woman! I don't see why she doesn't want them tackling him on the pitch. I don't see the problem. Cris is a douche-tard. I have a guess on what might happen...! Okay, so, she's gonna talk to Fernando, who's gonna be all "no, it was nothing, I'm good" and then they'll like...argue lightly, and then he'll tell her what he said and then she'll be sad again and then they'll have make up sex. And then Cristiano will burst through the door all bitchface queen style, and complain about his hair, but see Fernando and Karmen goin' at it in bed, and then he'll be sad and angry and go away and never come back because he fell in a hole in southern Asia. That would make for an interesting plot, I think :] Also. I just noticed this, but damn, she cries a lot.
Love the new background soooo hot! The fighting was intense i was like go Sergio booo Cris lol. Very cool and loved it:*) Can't wait for more along with maybe a "the grass is greener..." story??? Maybe? Please lol:*)
Ahhh! THEY FINALLY KISSED! YAY! I was so happy something finally happened between the two of them! I just wonder where this is going to leave them? And I can't wait to see what goes down on the pitch, I'm hoping to see a showdown!
YES!! SUCCESS!! FINALLY, WOO HOOOO!!! I was intensely hoping something like that would happen. Yeah, Sergio's gonna do something on the pitch. Obviously. But Karmen and Fernando should do something too! ...In the bedroom! :)
Sorry i havn't commented!! was on holidays but am back now and all caught up!!!! :D i love this update!!! can't wait to see sergio take on ronaldo!!!! and i love fernando so happy they kinda sorted out their problem, sooooo happy he kissed her!!! just hope he doesn't do anythin stupid!! that goes for sergio aswell!!!! :P so once again loved your update and cannot wait for the next chapter!!! :D