Help! I'm Housing a Hero - Comments

I randomly found this story and it's amazing. Soo sirry to see you didn't finish

I finally found this story again! ; u ;
Hehehe, I do so enjoy reading it...
I wish you'd continue, but I guess I'll just have to use my imagination, for this story and Boy From the Stars.

Also, herp derp. Mysterious how Andrew has pretty much total disappearded with the rise in Hero action.

Kjust finished reading all six chapters. Andi must say, pretty uniwue story you have going on. Throughly enjoyed what has been posted. One factor I love about your writing style? The length of the chapters. Hardly noticed any repeated informatiom, but the spelling errors were a bit annoying, though easy to understand. Hope you consider updating again. <3 It's been a while...

I know that you are probably extremely busy with life, but this is truly a fantastic story. I'm not at all surprised to hear that you are getting one of your books published, I will definitely be looking for it. But please update! I am agonizing over what will happen next in this story! I love the characters, the action, and the mystery, I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Mrs. V. is an evil scientist in disguise who is not very good and must rely upon others to get what she wants done. (Sorry. That's totally random and a guess that I KNOW is not right but I felt like saying it anyway ^^)

Anyway, I'm loving the update, and getting back to a regular schedule? YEAH!!! I like the sound of that. Although I'm more hard-pressed to update during school than summer...haha, you're just awesome like that.
Still working on the picture I had in mind, but it's not going anywhere yet. I can't get it right...and I need to find a reference for abs XDDDD

Well, until the next amazing update !

Yay an update!! Its was real good! Dang Mrs. V. is to paranoid for her own good I don't like her she shouldve been told off lol. I don't mind the shortness because I read them off my phone which is little so it would take me foooooorever to read them so shorters fine.

Sorry I'm so late - my comp at home has a virus >(. I'm at my sisters, and I nearly freaked when I saw you'd updated. AND I voted for WPP XDDDD

Anyway, I loved the update, and I'm so glad Hero's back and alive, although he is a little worse for wear.
And yes, I noticed the innkeeper's daughter was named Amanda...it never occurred to me that it was for any particular reason until you gave me a mention. Then I felt my face go really warm.

I love the story so far, can't wait for more!

BTW - you're in second in that poll at the moment. Thought you might want to know if you hadn't checked recently.
'Til next time!

Awesome!
And I agree with Dawning_Love.

Yep, this is awesome. Just like your other stories...
Your writing is just addictive, every single story you have written has had me hooked and I seriously get so excited and emotional when I read them. (Sometimes I even cry...shh don't tell anyone XD). You make great storylines too, and I LOVE the long chapters. Though, you need to update more... my brain is itchy for more :)

u updated!!!! yea!!!! i just saw that u updated so im going to finish the story later today. i forgot how long ur chapters are

YAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!! Update!!!!!
i is soo happeeeeeey! xD
i luuv it! it was super awesome! poor hero is all beat up!
i bet Riel is like half alien/SuperHero or something...
i can't wait for the next update! :D

i dont normally comment on stories....ever...but i decided tht i would just say tht this story is amazing and i cant wait until the next chapter.

I'm so happy you updated! And I gotta say I loved the reference to color changing elves and a talented creature who can speak many languages ;). Don't worry about taking awhile as much as I love reading your story people do have lives and no one can expect you to live yours off the computer just for this story. =D

You've spoiled us with this new chapter; So much is happening! :D

First off, I totally laughed at the WPP references. I can tell Amanda's story will be AH-mazing. ;)

I was beginning to miss Hero in the story - which is silly, it's only chapter 5, haha - I'm so glad he's back. Well... not in the state he's in, of course, but I know he's going to get better. He's a superhero! Plus, Riel's got some freaky... stuff of her own to help him. I just don't know what yet. Ha.

I can see things getting even more interesting than they already are. I can't wait! I can see Riel developing more feelings for Hero. If he's going to be in her personal space for more than one day, things are bound to heat up. Know what I'm saying? Eh, eh? Haha.

Anyways! Enough of my ramblings. I'd just like to say this was an amazing update. I'll be looking forward to the next. Most definitely. :D

I know I just commented but I just wanted to say that
1) I don't mind the chapter length.
2) I think her dad was a super hero.
3) She may have inherited some of his supernatural powers.
4) Alexander is my top guy for being Hero.
I just forgot to put that in the last comment. :)

I know I just updated but I just wanted to say that
1) I don't mind the chapter length.
2) I think her dad was a super hero.
3) She may have unherited some of his supernatural powers.
4) Alexander is my top guy for being Hero.
I just forgot to put that in the last comment. :)

So, I saw that you had posted another chapter for WPP and I decided to check it out, which led to me going to your profile which led to me finding this truly amazing story.
Well....truly amazing so far anyway.
I mean, how do you come up with these story ideas? Elves, spunky girls, and now super heros? Wow.
I really like Hero so far in the story and I'm excited to see where you go from chapter 5. I really hope that Reil comes to like Hero, and Hero the same for....Reil or Riel? I don't know but either way I still hope they end up together.
Also, I'm going to subscribe because I know this story won't disappoint so please update soon because I am desperate for a good story to read and I know that you can most diffently deliver.
One last thing before I go,
I really like how you went with a orignal superhero story instead of a typical Superman or Batman story like others would.
Good for you!
Ha, anyway....Update soon please!

Can't wait for Monday =3
I ran out when I saw the email, adn told Mom: "My new favorite story was updated!!" got my supper, and ran back to the computer to devour the update xP
I understand why updates sometimes run late...I probably should have updated tons of my stories this week but I didn't lol.
Until your next amazing update!!!

PS: Hero. Is. Alive. Your summary practically gives it away! And I hope she Mrs...I can't remember her name, Hodges??? - I hope she believes Riel, because if she tries to send her back...dun dun dunn....XDDD

NOoOooooouuuuu!!!! Hero can't be dead!
and her dad maybe was an older superhero or superman!!!!! :D Yay Superman!!! tehe!
i hope that she can make it to her house safe..ruuuun riel ruuuuuuuuuun!!! ;P
please update soon with skittles on top!!!!!!! :3