Hide & Seek - Comments

  • OH MY GOD!!!! What just happened?! OK so from the beginning: She moves into the house, finds a picture of the Cullen's, meets the people, goes to school, finds out that her moms book is like speaking of what happens to Copper, she gets attacked by a vampire (don't ask me which one because I have no idea), gets drugged by Carlisle, sees Tobi but hes a vampire, gets drugged by said person, goes home, months pass, and finally her mom starts writing again, her mom gets taken and most likely eaten,Copper finds out about wolves, moves in with the wolves, and now shes fighting sleep and Arty thinks he imprinted on her and her mom is now somewhere in Canada with some people and.....that's it. Right? I got it all? OK now I'm like freaking out. I like the part in one of the last chapters when shes like 'I should of moved to Switzerland and met a cute normal European boy.' I just laughed at that. But I remember almost crying in one but they all blend together so well.....(yes that was a complement)....If I was her I would of claimed crazy and drove myself to the nearest crazy house.....but now I'm craving hot coco and I wish her dad cold come in some where in this.....it is so good and I am soooooooo sorry about this long ass comment.....I give cookies to you for reading all of this....
    May 21st, 2012 at 10:48pm
  • AMAZING!! You had me for a moment there but i would have thought she would have fought more or something! Like running away from everything or wallowing deeply into depression before she would even begin to like being with the wolves. But what about her mom? is she really a vampire now?
    January 18th, 2012 at 07:07am
  • I really like the character info, I already knew some of it (of course) and then there was all this random information I don't think I knew and then some more important stuff I difenetly didn't know.. Anyways, moving away from that. So Arty thinks he's in love.. hmm.. I'm too sure about that one. But I won't know for sure until later.. The whole thing about what I thought is kind of hard for me.. I tend to forget really fast.. sorry... hmm.. I can't remember if there was anything else right now.. but if there isĀ“, I'll just write another comment later..

    more soon please! =)
    November 29th, 2011 at 12:17pm
  • you will not get my oppionen about who she should or shouldn't end up with. I'm keeping that information for myself1 :P Oh and by the way, I love you for updating this quickly! it was a delightful surprise to get, since I didn't think you were going to update again in the near future =) As for Copper, I'm thinking that I like her. She's a bit weird, but tough.. I don't really know how to explain it completely.. so I think that's what I can think of right now.

    other than that, I enjoyed this chapter and I'm hoping for even more soon =)
    November 24th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • wow, thiss is pretty interesting so far!
    *subscribes*
    November 23rd, 2011 at 09:07am
  • I've just realised that I haven't given you a decent comment yet - so here goes nothing. Okay so I really like your story. Mostly because it is REALLY good and because I haven't read anything like it before. Well not anything worth reading or mentioning anyways. I like the characters and you keep it interesting throughout the entire story (so far at least). I think the only negative thing is that you might want to check you spelling, grammar and word use. I think I read somewhere that the air was pregnant(??) Updating speed could be a tiny bi faster. But I'm not going to complain, since I know I'm no better myself.

    Okay that was ALOT.. so I'll end my seemingly never ending comment with: I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope that you will update again soon =)
    November 22nd, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • YAYAYAY! just read the new update, and I absoloutly love what is happening! I can't wait for the next chapter. Seriously, I have so much time (just got my wisdom teeth out), so I don't really have much to do except read!!
    Keep up the great writing!
    November 20th, 2011 at 06:40am
  • I really love this story.
    I was wondering why I wasn't getting any updates, and then I realised I had changed my email addy :)
    So just re-read the whole story and now I can't wait for the next update!!! :D
    November 20th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • i love this! please update soon.
    November 20th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • Okay so like I just started reading this story. And I LOVE it, Ive never read a story like this! It very differnt from others Ive read..PLEASE update (:
    February 13th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • Oh... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
    I hope you get everything you wished for.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 05:47am
  • Emily and Leah combined.
    I loved the this could be a book series comment.
    It made me giggle.
    The teenage boy reading material was good too.
    I love the wolves, I want one.
    Anyway, I'm sleepy, I'm gonna go to sleep now.
    I hope to see another update soon.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 05:44am
  • Maybe from another story on Mibba called "Operation Beautiful"? I don't know but that's my best guess.

    HAPPY EARLY SWEET SIXTEEN BABY! If it helps I'm giving you an Ironman car in my mind :D

    Hope you update again soon!
    January 22nd, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • AWSOME update. I was wondering when you would update actually. I just hope it won't be so long for the next one ^_^ sooo. please updare soon.
    January 22nd, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • I FEEL GOOD! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!
    I think Copper needs a little bit of time to take this all in. Her mind is having trouble taking this all in at once and its not really taking in common sense.

    HoPE YOU UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
    January 21st, 2011 at 07:23am
  • So...
    It's been awhile.
    Dear god this girl has bad luck.
    Her poor mother doesn't even realize that she's writing her daughters future.
    Let's hope she wants a happy ending.
    Can't wait to see the chapters get bloody.
    I wonder what's going to happen with the wolves.
    I need you to update again... sooner rather than later please.
    January 16th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • AWSOME chapter! update again soon, it's no fun waiting ;) but shouldn't judge, I'm not any better myself. so I'm just hoping it will be soon:D
    January 15th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • UPDDATTTEEEE!!!!!
    November 23rd, 2010 at 02:31am
  • so i must admit, im not the biggest fan of any fan fiction - i find it too hard to read.

    but this was well written and not that bad.
    the writing is great, like your other stuff, and
    i have read twilight and the other books, so this flows well with it.
    (:
    November 12th, 2010 at 04:18pm
  • I love this story :)
    so glad you updated!
    I was so surprised when I opened my email and saw I had an update notification for Hide &Seek haha.
    Yay!
    Update soon :D?
    September 30th, 2010 at 11:07pm