*mouth falls open* holy shit this chapter was so fucking EPIC *claps* I loved it! I'm going to the midnight showing I'm gonna where a team Damon shirt though go go vampire diaries *wink* anyways... Can't wait to see the outcome I'm guessing that Jasper attacked her probably turning het thus breaking the treaty forcing the wolves to attack ... That's just my theory though
Awesome, I loved the last chapter. Full of surprises and twists that made me stare wide eyed at the screen. When you added a piece of Twilight at the end, I think that's an awesome conclusion for the chapter. Very exciting and intense, I love it. The cliffhanger leaves you twitching for more. I can't wait for more, keep the music rolling. I'll be watching. - Unknown
So, what I want to know, is why isn't every single member of Mibba reading this story?? Seriously, it's amazing. I've never run across something like this ever on this site, and it's a breath of fresh air compared to all of the other writers trying to recreate Stephenie Meyer's world with a different female lead character. It's a great idea for a Twilight fanfic, and completely original. I love it. Honestly. It also helps that you're a great writer, and have an amazing way with words. I cannot wait for your next update. I'm quite literally sitting on the edge of my seat.
Found this story, glad I did. I love the idea, very original. The details inside of it is brilliant, the paragraphs well structured; I love it, I absolutely love it. It caught my attention just reading the summary. Fasinating really, I can't wait for more. I have so many question, I want them answered. Hopefully there'll be an update soon. I can't wait for the next surprise. Writers block sucks! I'll be watching. - Unknown
The fucking door! Damn it. Someone else if fucking opening it or something. And what's up with him staring at her neck. Is he a vampire too? Or is he a werewolf, you know the real kind... Not the twilight kind. Because I'm confused. *pouts* I loved this chapter. :) I'm sorry it gave you so much trouble. I would read the new story too. Because I support your creativity.