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  • SmexyPeanutButter

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    It's fine :D
    I love how she just does whatever to get to school.

    Hope you update agian soon!
    September 30th, 2010 at 01:41am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    Love the Update
    September 29th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    *squeals*
    I'm so happy to see this chapter out.
    I've missed it.
    Anyway I'm glad everything has clicked in her head now.
    September 29th, 2010 at 03:18pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    More soon
    September 29th, 2010 at 04:33am
  • Patty Lovell

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    *Gasp* TOBI! :O
    September 3rd, 2010 at 12:29am
  • Lijgirl1328

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    update soon please :D?
    I really wanna read more!!!
    August 28th, 2010 at 07:19pm
  • Arabella-

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    I totally love how this is written, and love the story line. But when are you going to update again?!?! Im dying in antisipation!!!!
    August 19th, 2010 at 07:09am
  • CynicalLover

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    I absolutely love this story. :]
    August 13th, 2010 at 12:49pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    new reader,
    this is a great story,
    so original.
    can't wait for more
    June 28th, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • Lijgirl1328

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    this story is amazing :D
    you need to update soon!
    dang that was Tobi all along?
    Wait... ahh! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
    i really, really like your writing style. You write a little like me, and I like it. Very well written, and excellent story line. You're really developing your characters, which is something I enjoy! Not alot of people to that.
    Keep up the great work!
    June 27th, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • skinny love.

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    I actually do adore your story. (:
    June 23rd, 2010 at 07:42pm
  • Pointed.At.The.HEART

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    This story wants me to read more and more. This is one of the best fan-fiction stories I have ever read. Keep updatig.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 04:30pm
  • TheUnknownSoulChase

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    Whoa, that was a big surprise. O.o Gosh, I definitely wasn't expecting that; but I love it! The detailed experience in the last chapter is amazing! You better start explaining things because you just added a few pages of questions into my head. Your story is so amazing! So intense with a hint of suspense to it that makes you just leaning forward and on the edge of your seat trying to get it all in. I can't wait to get more information about what's going on and what happened with Tobi, I'm so excited for more. This journey is turning out to be a brilliant walk. (I call stories, journies...) I'll be watching. - Unknown
    June 23rd, 2010 at 12:14pm
  • xHurricaneStreets

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    OMG, i didn't see THAT coming
    hahahah ^^
    I need more x♥
    June 23rd, 2010 at 07:33am
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    I usually don't read Twilight fan fics, but this one is really good! Update wicked soon!
    June 23rd, 2010 at 04:02am
  • I'm.Not.Insane.

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    Love it(:
    June 23rd, 2010 at 03:52am
  • kati

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    LOVE this chapter, actually love the whole story:) Fabulous!!

    I know that I would like to read a Sam Uley story (as mentioned at the end of an earlier chapter)!!
    keep up the great as writing:)
    June 23rd, 2010 at 02:12am
  • Ebii-La

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    Now I'm not a big fan (Or a fan at all) of the twilight novels but I really like this.
    The characters, however little you've gotten into them already have a certain depth.
    I honestly have so many freaking questions that it's not even funny!
    June 23rd, 2010 at 01:55am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    HOLY SHIT!
    That came out of nowhere!
    Dude, how was I supposed to see that coming!
    *pouts*
    June 23rd, 2010 at 01:53am
  • a walking travesty;

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    I just had a complete and total 'oh snapple' moment when she saw Tobi again. For real, I have so many questions. Why is he back now? Who attacked Copper? So many questions, so little time. How bout you update again and answer them? :D
    June 23rd, 2010 at 01:49am
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