You Never Know When You’ll Run Out of Time - Comments

And there is the picture of the dress! It's beautiful. I really feel like it fits the character too. Great job there! Great job with this whole damn story. Gahh. Did I mention before that I now want to get married on Christmas Eve. I know they had to because of Jon's and her mom but that is just like perfect. And to get to wake up on Christmas, first day as husband and wife. I love the idea, sort of unrealistic for normal folk because who the heck would come? Lol. But maybe I'll plan it like 2 years in advance and get some people to show up. Or pay actors to sit there. Why am I sitll writing. Gonna go finish now! :) :) :)

I loved the Davey bit. I just love the sibling bits. Lol. But I don't understand the significance of the baseball on the bracelet.

Screw the minimal comments thing. I'm just gonna comment every time I feel so inclined. Or could just wait to submit them but nahhh, I'm already doing it this way.

The chain thing...was perfection. You deserve an award. It was the perfect way to show that she really had forgiven Jon.

Oh wait! I guess 3 comments because I forgot I wanted to say something. I'm an idiot. Anyway, when the whole cheating fiasco was mentioned, I was suddenly pissed again. I don't know if I'll ever get over that. But I do believe he is sorry and I don't think he'll do it again, so I'm glad she forgave him. But I'll never get over it. I really wish her family knew though. I don't want them to view Jon as the perfect guy or whatever when he clearly fucked up hardcore. That is all. Until I finish. Rofl.

This chapter is really long so I'm gonna break this up into two comments. That way I don't forget what I wanted to say. Lol.

FINALLY THE WEDDING! I'm so excited! I loved the bit with her brother, especially when he was describing her and Jon's relationship. Seeing an outside perspective on their relationship was very cool.
I really loved the bit between her sister and Jon too. The line about keeping her away from Kaner pretty much made my night.

That's as far as I've gotten so far. Off to finish the rest! :)

sad that this is the end but can't wait for the epilogue. i hope it is later in life including a long happy marriage and lots of babies

please update this story. i have benn waiting to see an email from it because i love it soooo much. can't wait for more

I cannot wait to see the dress!

Glad everything with them is looking up.
Hopefully it'll stay that way for awhile!
Great update!
Can't wait for more!!

I'm seriously obsessed with this story,<333. Loved this chapter, they're just too cute to boot :).

This chapter was a little cryptic - although it is nice to know that they are both on the same page - there does appear to be something left to be explained.

Ahhh but that is one of the things that make this story wonderful.

Look forward to the next update.

Loved it! <3

I'm sure Hawks fans can agree that it better be for more than 5 years. Great chapter.

Great update honey. So sweet.

so when he said "it's done" he meant the 5-year contract? What was this "all of them" business? what exactly is them. short chapter but a good one.can't wait for the next update. please do it soon. i can't wiat for the wedding.

<<3333 More soon please!

Love the update honey. Can't wait for more.

Finally caught up after decades away from Mibba! Pleaseeeee don't tell me she's going to cheat. I am also super curious to see what the new dirt on Jon is. :-) I love that Jon has loved her forever and it wasn't just their mothers bring them together. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Oh I hope nothing bad happens at this party. I'm also dying to know what she wanted Davey to get for Jon.. hmm. Great Update :)

Loved the update. Hopefully nothing happens at the party! <3