Saving Sloane Winters - Comments

God damn, you are an extremely talented thirteen year old. (or fourteen now? I have no idea) This whole story was fucking amazing; unpredictable, addicting, realistic, clever, and so extremely perceptive. Good luck with writing, and please write a few books because you deserve to make this your living.

Sincerely and gratefully,

Trevyn Eden

HOW DID I GO WITHOUT ALL OF THIS?

THAT WAS LOVELY. LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY. Everything is finally explained, and I am happy.

Off to see your other stories!

So I'm trying not to cry

And I'm not doing a very good job. But god, this was a great ending. Everything about this story was great. Everything. Do not change anything, look back on this with pride. Know that you ended this just as wonderfully as it started. And that the last chapter was a good way to look back on this story.

Thanks for giving the wrold this story!

-Emily

so i finished both the first and this story tonight and i loved both of them
i loved the random parts that didnt really happen and the theories about life.
they were incredible.
this story was utterly amazing

for the who do you like better question
I most definitely like Teak more, even though he hurts Sloane, he's hurting too.
I think Tristan is just sad, he didn't want Sloane be cause he liked her at first he wanted her becasue he knew that Teak hurt her, and to get revenge on Teak for hurting, and I think thats really sad of someone to do that
ANYWAY
this is absolutely fantastic and i love the different points of views.
this is AH-mazing.....

I've been silent too long.
And now, Sloane and Teak are officially done.
I'm done being silent.

First off, lemme say THANK YOU for introducing me to One Night Only.
When you posted their video with Emma Watson, I was hooked.
And now, they're one of my favorite bands!
George Craig is a babe, oh man :)

Now, about your story!
This was, by far, the most original oringinal story I've ever read.
I love the way you formated your chapters.
It's so... New. So fresh.
It always made me smile when I saw your updates :)

Now, Sloane and Teak.
Oh man... They're my favorite couple to read about.
Their relationship was so complicated, I just wanted to yell at them!
But they were so cute :)
I don't know what it was about them that I loved.
It was just... Everything.

And now I'm sad to see their story go.
Like I said earlier, this update was a favorite of mine to see.
Maybe I'll lurk on your new stories... :)

Woohooo she got her grade. :] Anyways, thank you for an excellent story. I'll be reading any of what you write next. I can't wait.

I have been in love with this story since the very begining and I am now sad to see the final ending! Will be subscribing to your other stories as I think you are a very talented writer and I enjoy reading your creations :)

I think I'm going to cry

Yeah! That's it! I'm giong to cry when this is over! I LOVE THIS! I WANT TO HAVE IT FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER! Gahhhh! This is beautifully written and creativly worded. This is amazing

I'm missing this story already, I swear this is what has gotten me through the year!!
Cant wait to read all your other stories :D

I think it's good you didn't have them make up while Sarah was having her baby. It would remind me of the movie "How to Deal", but that's not a bad thing. I liked that movie. I love the way it's turned out. Can't wait for the last chapter and other stories :D

i do rather love this story beyond life itself.

Amazing!

Only one more :[ Hahha. I knew this day would come.

One more chapter??!!
: /
Lol
Actually Im excited :)
I hope it ends in rainbows and shit like that xD

I AM GOING TO KIDNAP TEAK AND MARRY HIM.

seriously

more please ?

Australian stories and authors are the best, and this is no exception. I adore it. You make your characters seem so real :)

This wouldn't be based in Melbourne would it? It would make me adore the story infinetly so.

Australian stories and authors are the best, and this is no exception. I adore it. You make your characters seem so real :)

This wouldn't be based in Melbourne would it? It would make me adore the story infinetly so.

I read their idea and it seems as if you're idea is being slightly mimicked but I think that mainly it is only the name that seems stolen. I thought Sloane Winters was such an original name until I saw the book by Alyson Noel with two friends named Sloane and Winter. I was like HEY I know that name. I almost bought it for that reason, then I realized it wouldn't be like your writing so I didn't.