Saving Sloane Winters - Comments

i haven't commented in a long time! After the vacation and hiatus, I completely lost track of the chapter I was on, so I re-read them :) Tristan is a really interesting character, I can't wait to see how he develops. And of course Teak is just delicious, I liked this chapter, i think it showed another side of Teak :)

Loved the latest chapter.
I understand it, even if u dont haha
I think Teak is trying to convince himself that Sloane was like all the other girls, even though she wasnt.

Yay for more Teak. I have safely returned Teak to you for future chapters, only because Sloane needs him. I feel like Tristan isn't all he says he is. For some reason I didn't think this until this chapter. Bahaha. Excellent writing as usual.

Teak is adorable.
update soon please :)

i like the australian references! chapel street is in melbourne right? and western bulldogs is sydney? im from sydney, and i like em, makes the story more real, like these could possibly be real people i dont know living in the same city as me

Thank You for finalllyyyy writing Teak's POV!! PLEASE UPDATE(:

Bahhh! TEAK!
Dude you have no idea how much I love him :) Haha
This story is amazing, I love how your planning it out :)
Its going to be so good I'm really excited
SHE BETTER END UP WITH TEAK!
Or else I'm going to go insane
Teakkkkk
<3

Tristain wants Sloane??

OH WELL BUDDY! YOU WANT TO KNOW WHY!?!?!

Because Teak, is going to have her forever because they are perfect for each other. And your just a big dummy....

that is all :D

An insight into tristan's evil mind eh?
i like it :)
more soon please

Tristan has finally become more than just a one personality character. We finally see his side of the equation. I'm quite excited by the development. I'm sure Sloane's not going to fall for it, or maybe she might since she's so out of herself with sadness. Can't wait!!!!

Seventh chapter.

Oooh, so Tristan is an evil mastermind too? He and Kay would be perfect planners together-- but I bet Tristan's plan is pretty different from Kay's, so they might clash and something bad will happen!
MUAHAHAH!

I don't mind Tristan as a cunning hottie-- I'll always and forever love Teak Richardson.

And please do update that already written chapter! I'm already dying!

OH MY GGGGAWD.
I LOVE YOUR NEW LAYOUT! IT'S SO PRETTY! THAT PICTURE IS SO ADORABLY LOVELY!

Sixth chapter
Anyway, that was a really, really, really good chapter. I love how Kay admires and hates Teak at the same time! Sloane has great friends, and Teak's as yummy as always!
I'm excited about Tristan actually too.

GOOD LUCK!

But boy am I glad you updated. This story is amazing, adn I MADE A BANNER But idk you want it...?? :)

i lovee the storyy but i've had enough of the girls' point of view and want to see what teak is feeling from HIS point of view. kthankkss(:

slooane! aww.
please update soon :)

Loved it. I'm excited to find out how Teak is feeling about the whole ordeal through Riley. I also love that you gave us more insight into Sloane. I really love their names, I don't know if I ever mentioned that before.

AH-MAZING!

:)

I feel sad that Sloane is trying to get over Teak, although I would too. Perhaps it's because her personality reminds me of myself. And Teak reminds me of my boyfriend. The first day he came to our school everyone was afraid of him because of how he dressed, and thought he was arrogant when he was really just shy and angry at the world. I was the first person to talk to him. But anyways, that sort of makes it hard for me to say to Sloane "Get over him." But at the same time, if he can't trust her, and she obviously can't trust him, it could be time, although I need to know more about this Tristan fellow. Lovely chapyer, as usual. And for someone who has never been in love you're great at writing about it.

OOOH!
you mentioned teak :D
loved this chapter, nice imagination!
update sooon

Oh shit, my computer fucked up and put that message down like... six times. Sorry. ;(