guh why doesn't this have more chapters. i love it :) you know, i think australian writers have got it going on. i've stumbled upon heaps lately and they're all kinda brilliant. i love this story. so much. hnng.
I'm excited for you that you know where the story is going, and can keep the story coming along. I couldn't do that. Once I know and ending, I lose interest. Anyways, I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I don't like Tristan. He's not as neato as Teak.
What are you talking about, the ending was perfectly excellent as usual. I love how much you know about private schools, and how detailed you are. Great job!
eeek an update! I've been patiently waiting for them, and I will continue to do so. great job on this. I like Tristan... but Teak is awesome too. Actually, I'd be quite happy if she ended up with either one of them.
no no no no!! she needs to take Teak back because he's the sex! xD xD
Great chapter, seriously. I feel so bad for him, but good for Sloane for saying no. I probably would have said yes because i'm just that weak. Keep up with the updates, and trust me, you deserve feedback :)
More praise for your ego: This chapter was spectacular. It seemed like the chapters before it were the light racing down the fuse and this was a big bang. A moment the Teak was actually truthful. It was quite relieving that he's finally realizing he's got to step up and be a man. At least that's my view.
You do deserve feedback woman! haha I cant believe you thanked me, I was so shocked! haha But anywho, amazing update. I think Teak should've told her, but more than likely she will think hes lying. Sloane is so stupid haha At least she knows now that Teak still cares? Or maybe she thinks hes lying about that...Or is in denial...
I am kinda freaking out right now. I mean this my all time favorite story on this site or any site for that matter. The whimsical way it's written and all their POV's that are always changing. God this is just breathtaking. I feel my heart break along with Sloan's and you can't help but cheer her and Teak on. And the last sentance is keeping me just begging for another chapter very very soon!
i told you i loved this boy!
more soon please :D