June 22nd, 2010 at 12:25am
"Mentally, I was shuddering at his murder of the English language."
" 'Shut up,' I snapped. 'Don't talk to me.' " hahaha! Even though Valentina is kind of bratty, I totally laughed when she told him to shut up!
Anyways, I love your story so far! Keep writing! :]
Update soon! (: