Something's Missing - Comments

Great update! Loved it! <3

Very cute with Sera, Brian and Prue. Loved it x

Michelle seemed like she understands everything now...
please update soon! <3<3

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i just read this story and i LOVE it
Update soon please :)

that b!!!!! michelle lmao she's lucky that wasn't me, i'da whooped her behind!

I'm surpised michelle didn't yell at Brian.....sera and brian are so cute!!!!nice update!:)

Atleast they arent arguing

Wow a lot to take in one day.
But at least their is going make up but is going to using a peacemaker.
Brian and Seraphina are gotten a lot closer and Brian can show Sera affection openly.
So all the guys are glad that Brian has found someone that completes him and makes him happy.
Val is going to take a while since it was her twin sister that got hurt.
Even before Seraphina entered the picture, Brian and Michelle's relationship was already falling apart.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

REALLY good chapter! At least Michelle wasn't mean about anything. More soon, please?

Why do you keep saying "edited by a friend" rather than a username? Lol. Hm...I'm glad Brian and Michelle are getting alone, as well as Brian and Matt. I really can't blame Michelle- any girl would have done the same thing, unless she were a saint or some such. Prue's funny. *sigh* I'd scare Brian away by acting like her if I ever saw him, ruining my chances -_-"" That or faint. OH! I actually had this conversation with my friend; I'll tell you cuz you're my favorite author on Mibba.

So her aunt used to go to school with Avenged Sevenfold (ENVY!!!!!) so I said that she HAD to get me to meet them, I refuse to take no for an answer. I swear Matt or Brian will fall in love with me and we'll live happily ever after. We have to. Anyway, she told me that there was a concert where a girl fainted and so she somehow got the band's attention and stuff. So I said that it was a BRILLIANT idea, and she could knock me out and Matt or Brian (or both) would come to my rescue! But then she said that since she's a boxer, she might permanently knock me out. Then, when I woke up, I would go crazy looking for Matt/Brian and she would tell me they carried me to the hospital, stayed and left already.....

IT WON'T HAPPEN, I TELL YOU! She just needs to punch lighter...

Damn. I thought she was gonna admit to telling Erick about the affair.
Hope you update soon! <3

Drama = higher ratings :)
Go into detail about what happened with Erick & Michelle...
Can't wait for more <3

Yay her dad is going to be okay :D
But wow, so he may or may not be her biological father, intense stuff there o.o
But it shouldn't matter since Robert has been there for Sera since she was born!
Damn so Michelle told Erik about Brian and Sera....that is messed up.
I mean I understand that she was hurt but still....word vomit it hurts more people then we realize....
Glad Brian was there for Sera, and I hope Val can move past this and be civil with Sera.

Great update ;)
You really know how to make a reader smile (:

Wow I was about to bust out crying for a second. I'm so glad her dad is okay! But damn is Michelle a b***h! Argh! More soon, please?

I'm glad her dad is okay!
Can't wait for more! <3

Prue is my hero! Fuck, I love that girl! (I wish there was a story about Prue. I would so read it. She's actually a fun character.)
Shocked to learn about Robert who may or may not be Sera's dad.
But it doesn't matter what blood says, family is fucking family. FUCK IT. :)
I just want to know why Michelle told. I wanna believe she thought he knew and said it by accident, not wanting trouble but, then again Brian cheated and she was hurt.... I don't know. @.@

This story reminds me of the song Call Your Girlfriend by Robyn. I started listening to a cover of it after reading half the story and it just fits really well. I just subscribed and can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm glad Robert's okay. I would've cried if he died. He doesn't deserve to die.
I only hope that Sera and her mother work things out. My ex-friend has a mother just like that, but she has good intentions at heart. Put the next chapter up soon!

Oh my god!!!
I'm so glad her dad's ok! Even if he's not her real, I totally understand what Sera's saying. I'd feel the same way about my dad :3

And aww, Brian really is good for her x)

I loved this update, and can't wait until you write more! x)

I'm glad that Sera's dad is ok :) GO PRUE! <3
I can't believe that her mom tells her that now!
I hope she and Erick have a nice long talk and that they become ok :)
please update soon! <3<3

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