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  • celestial_royalty

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    WHAT?! AGAIN?! YOU MET AVENGED SEVENFOLD BEFORE?! ARE YOU SERIOUS?! HOW THE HELL DID YOU NOT GET PICTURES THE FIRST TIME!?!?!?

    And holy HELL, LA ON 4/20?!?!? That is it- my parents will not hear the end of my voice until I am promised that concert. No debate, there is NO DEBATE, I am SO going! I was DEVASTATED when they canceled their San Jose concert, practically in shock/tears. The second I saw it, I literally posted reminders on my phone for the year, the month, the week and the day before and then they cancelled it. I was so depressed, as an understatement.

    It would be SO COOL to meet you there,if when I go!!! Please say yes it would be the only possible thing that could top the night~~~ I mean come on, meeting my favorite online author AND my favorite band?

    Hm...not much to say on the chapter, honestly- I'm glad Brian got a step further with Sera's family and it's huge, ofcourse, but the chapter seemed fillerish nonetheless. And Sera's father waking up- huge, but fillerish. At least to me- I don't know if it's meant to be that way. Sera's mom was funny with Brian and I'm glad she has realized her faults (breaking the habit is another story, I'm sure) and apologized. I didn't feel that the whole your-father-may-not-be-your-father issue was huge because it's clear that the father-daughter love and relation was and always will be there, regardless of blood and genes.

    I can't wait for more, or your reply....=]
    March 9th, 2011 at 08:41am
  • headrushxreeta

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    aww i'm gonna be so sad when this ends, i love everything about this story. the progression of brian and sera's relationship was absolutely astounding and exhilarating. i cant wait to read what you've got planned next!
    March 9th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • naturalbornsynner

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    FUUUUUUUUUU! Everyone gets to fuckin c them but me!! They won't come here! *tear*
    I hope you have a hell of a time!
    And Sera's mom made me laugh.
    Not the fingers!! =O
    I adore this story, seriously. =) <3
    March 9th, 2011 at 07:23am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Aww man only two more updates....damnit, oh well all good things have to come to an end sometime...
    But I love how everything is settling in and that everyone is on better terms now :)
    I love stories where there are no loose ends....to many questions left unanswered.

    I loved this update
    You did a fantastic job!

    p.s. hope you have fun at the Avenged Sevenfold concert ^____^
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • hachie

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    Woah so only two more chapters and this story comes to an end!?
    So her mother has finally accepted that Sera is doing what she wants and doesn't need her help since she has grown up.
    I feel sad for Erick but he will find someone that will return the love he gives that person!
    But I think it was uncall for when Michelle opened her mouth and got Erick riled up.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • Lady_Dee11

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    Awww...I really like this chapter. It made me really happy. I'm so sad to see it end but it an amazing story. And I can't wait to read the last chapter. =D
    March 9th, 2011 at 06:21am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    I love this story so much. I wish it wasn't ending, but all good things do end....haha. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story!!
    March 9th, 2011 at 05:47am
  • HAIFISCH

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    Are they getting married? Please let them get married!
    March 9th, 2011 at 05:26am
  • darkeyes14226

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    Yay he woke up!
    March 9th, 2011 at 05:19am
  • Every..Single..Beat

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    Simply Amazing!!!
    March 6th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • mistery gurl

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    heya just thought id let you know, that ive spent my free time reading your story, and i love it, but i reckon that erik and michelle are gonna get to gether,
    but i love it, and i hope you update again soon :)
    *suscribes*
    March 6th, 2011 at 09:28am
  • Lady_Dee11

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    Great update!!! I loves it. =)
    March 5th, 2011 at 07:12am
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Even though I know Michelle must be hurting, at least she's not lashing out like she did when she first heard the news of the brief affair. I don't condone what she did by telling Erick, but I understand it. I wonder if Sera really isn't her father's biological daughter?
    March 5th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Well at least everything is looking up now :)
    But it will still be a long road until everyone is happy.
    Because more then one person was hurt in this formation of the relationship.
    Though Michelle and Erik will move on and find happiness to :)

    Great update!
    I really enjoyed it!!!!!
    March 4th, 2011 at 06:45am
  • darkeyes14226

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    That's a few sad chapters in a row :( I'm glad Robert will be ok though.
    March 4th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • Someday;

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    im officially in love with this story.
    its very unique in many ways.
    i cant wait for more :{D
    March 4th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • starr8nn

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    i dnt think you noticed this but i was listed twice in the comments...not upset or anything XD...very great update,,,the tension isnt as bad bbewteen bri and michelle as expected..so happy for sera
    March 4th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Crimson TigerLily

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    I love your story, I was so afraid that Sera's dad was going to be dead! And I feel for Michelle [and Erick] but at the same time... I can't help but feel glad. I never really liked Michelle anyways. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
    March 4th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Great update and I'm really glad that Sera's dad is alright. Looking forward to more!!!
    March 4th, 2011 at 12:01am
  • a venom

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    loved it
    March 3rd, 2011 at 10:27pm