This is so good, Jeremy is a royal ass, and wow John really needs to step up and admit that he wants her and needs her whether he thinks he's good for her or not! I loved this update, can't wait for the next!
Mkay, I pulled an all nighter on a school night just to read all of this! I absolutelylove it, its so unlike any other! Its like, there's a chance this story might end with a heartbreak! D: Anyways, this is by far the awesomest shit I have ever fucking read! :DD I'm in aerobics, about to pass out from being tired, but I had to come and comment. (: I love love love love it! :D I was going for Team Kenny at first, but the Team John, and know I don't know. I'll just roll with the flow, even thought deep inside I want her to be with Kenny. :o I love it! THis thing actually brought tears out of me! MY brother saw me crying and though I was pathetic, xD. So yeah, is the story done? Cause I don't know if that was the last chapter or not. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon? :{ Kaythnksbye(:
this story just keeps getting better, Ketely ooh. :DD keep it up, i've enjoyed reading the three last chapters despite the fact that i hate how melanie has come to the point of hurting herself for control..
Just found this story and I could absolutely not put it down (I guess close the browser window...) I made myself stay up last night until I got through all of the chapters. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. :]]
holy shitt, why have i not been getting updates about this?! this is serious, i missed so much! this is wonderful darling :) i cannot wait to find out what happens, like this is my face :O
I still find Kenny cool. I mean Melanie's a total heart breaker anyway. I'm starting to hate her now. LOL. Anyway. can't wait til John comes home!!! aaaah!! Update real soon. :) *still doesn't have a story for the contest* lol