Of Confidence - Comments

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poor Melanie! she sounds so broken, so afraid.
and just reading the description of the bathroom and how
she looked - i could just imagine it so clearly, like as if
i'm seeing it right before my eyes. :(((

she looks like fucking shit.
the sad kind of shit not the kind that looks pathetic.

awww.. if i were there or let's say, if i were john,
i would seriously scoop her in arms and
tell her that "first of all, i want you to remind me later to
ask you a description of that dude because i will personally hunt him
down go to the zoo, borrow one HORNY gorilla and get him raped or if not
that i would fucking beat him until his last breathe, that little shit. he is so going
to get it. and I know you're scared and you're so weak because you
got violated but life doesn't stop there, you should take that
horrible, horrible, HORRIBLE experience and use it to make
yourself stronger and that you're not going to go through that healing
process alone because i will be here for you, no matter what Melanie because
well, i love you and we're best friends and i PROMISE that i would never
let anyone hurt you again."

but anyway, awwwww. i'm on Team John Ohh right now.
I just love how he came to an instant rescue!
it just shows how much he truly loves melly. it's so adorable.
and i love how he wished for her to be there and how angry
he was that she wasn't.

and i just LOVE this part of the story:

He became scared; had bringing Taylor really hurt her this badly? Should he have begged her to come to London? Should he have kissed her lips once more before he left?

you know why? because that part meant that he was watching what he was doing which means
he really does care about Melanie's feelings. and its just..
ugggggggggggh!

i love it! :) seriously!
and yet again, you have not ceased to amaze me Ketely Ohh!
you are the BEST damn writer i have ever fucking known here.
like. no shit dude.
:)))

ohh! I got an idea.

*comment again*
I am so sorry that everytime I go online.
All I can think about is your story. So, my idea is...

John should give the raper a good fight. Like you know,
Karate, Judo or whatever. Whatever that could break his ass or bones.
Even better HEAD. Yeah! that's it! he should do that.

Well it's just an idea. But I'm pretty sure you can do better than me.
Or John could just stay with Melanie and comfort her and all that.
aha! Or maybe, Kenny could do that. ahaha. XD
*laughs out loud.*
*shouts Kenny*

Anyway, going back to the topic. I can't stop reading!
why? Well I don't know. Why don't you ak that yourself and then tell me how addictive your story is.
From the very beggining I was all. *jaw drops*
Like that! Yes! this whole time. and now, I am still amazed about how you write.

You know If i could write like you? damn. I can die happy.
You know you should make a book. Or did I tell you that already?
I'm your biggest fan. Like seriously.
sEriously! :D

no, seriously.
I'm not joking.
*crosses heart*
I promise.

So.
update soon.
OR else I might die.
well maybe not.
but seirously.
I might.

My gosh. My eyes are burning like they've been through hell.
You know what? I was pretty happy when I say Kenny's name.
But then he didn't really play much part on the chapter did he now? I was totally happy when John though Taylor was Melanie. I was HAPPY. can you believe it? It's like I've never been happy in the last chapters and now I am.
But wait. why were there blood in the room? and please update SOON. I can't wait. :D
I'm telling maymeek right away.
I love it how you did it. Like how John went home and when Hayley called him. It all fitted so perfectly.
I am so happy. ha! I swear if Kenny isn't in the next chapter I'm going to go Awol on you. aha. jkidding.
So yeah. Nicely done Ketely.
and mOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE. :D

so stoked she stood up for herself. and fuck john for even bringing that stupid girl! Keep the writing coming!

I just want you to know, that I'm practically balling
my eyes out right now. Thanks a lot, Ketely Ohh. :((

*lips are quivering, tears are streaming*

why did she have to be so stubborn?! UGH. I just knew it.
I knew something bad was gonna happen when John told her
that some guys wouldn't let her go if she asked them to.

poor, poor Melanie. T_T *sniff, sniff*
God, i could just... just imagine it. the hurt.
the trauma that she'll feel after.
and to make things worse, the boys aren't
there to comfort her. i feel so bad for her.
i could just. gaaaaaaah. i could just punch that asshole
who fucking raped her! no, WAIT.

THAT'S IT! I COULD JUST... GET A HORNY
GORILLA AND GET HIM RAPED BY THAT!
that'll surely give him a taste of his own medicine.

anyway, i love how you added in the author's note that rape is a very serious thing
and that if you have experienced it you should go to that site you put up and get help.
it shows that you caaaaaaaaaaare for your readers and an author who cares for
her readers is a GREAT author! :DDD

you're a great author ketely ooh! :DD better than that even! :D

Oh my gosh. I didn't see that coming. You wrote the last part well, not too detailed but not vague. I hope someone helps her. And gives that asshole multiple much needed kicks to his balls.

This chapter is .. I don't know what to say.
I am completely speechless. I am shocked.
I never saw this coming. What happened to her?
she IS all grown up. Too grown up actually.
:(( I'm sad. I am disturbed and devastated.
I don't know what to say. at all.
Ketely. You better update soon! And soon is supposed to be now.
But take your time. I'm trying to recover from this chap.
It hurts. I feel her pain. :|
ooooof.
Great work though. despite all the drama.

This chapter is .. I don't know what to say.
I am completely speechless. I am shocked.
I never saw this coming. What happened to her?
she IS all grown up. Too grown up actually.
:(( I'm sad. I am disturbed and devastated.
I don't know what to say. at all.
Ketely. You better update soon! And soon is supposed to be now.
But take your time. I'm trying to recover from this chap.
It hurts. I feel her pain. :|
ooooof.
Great work though. despite all the drama.

SOOOOO not what i expected but really good chapter, John was right......poor Melanie....

I knew it was coming...
That doesn't really count though, so whatever.

Okay, so I'm finally all caught up with this story! (:
I'm gonna be honest, I don't completely hate John, even though I know
That he seems like the biggest jackass in the world in this story.
I do, however, hate how he feels like he can treat her however he wants,
And expect her to always forgive him. There's a line that he keeps crossing,
When he shouldn't be.
And the paper she wrote for her class, made me tear up a little bit. Not gonna lie.
It just seemed so real and genuine. (:
And when she told John off on the balcony, I felt so happy for her.
She finally stood her ground.
And then in this last chapter, it was like he was foreshadowing what was going to happen.
Or, like he just knew.
I'm so sad that this happened to her, because I know it's going to
Cause her so much emotional and physical pain, and probably mental as well.
She doesn't have her boys with her, they're all off in London.
I have no clue what she's going to do, but I can't wait to find out!
You're an amazing writer, by the way! (:

Yeah, so I'm kind of pissed at you because she was raped...but, I'm gonna have to deal.
Naive drunk girls really annoy me so you should keep 'em comin' so I know what happens next and get over this chapter;);)

*dabs teary eyes with a handkerchief*
awwww.. Melanie knows how to fight back now. :)
i am so happy, she's not letting anyone push her around anymore,
she's not letting them nasty emotions get the best of her.
like annyka, i am proud! VERY proud!

i hate how John says he loves her but he's not good for her and that's
why he isn't with her but yeeeeeeeeeeet he keeps leading her on.
its like... almost like.. he's playing with her emotions or something.
i am really glad that Melanie finally had the guts to bark back! :))

by the way, you really did a great job writing that fight scene.
i could seriously feel the intensity between them, like as if i was in the same
room when they said those things to each other. i would be shrinking with every
word! xD

and when Melanie said that last line. the one that says, "Yeah, because you'd be burning in Hell."
i was like, "oh no she didn't! goooooo melanie! woot! woot!" damn! that was such a good ending Ketely!

guuuuuuuuuuuuuh-reeeeeeeeeeeeyt job! :DDDDDDDD
keep it up ketely oooh! :DD
i hope you udpate suh suh suh sooooooooooooon. :DD

Yey. Our Melanie's all grown-up. I'm so proud of her.
You make me so happy. :))
Oh. so will Kenny be in the picture now? I hope he will.
ahahaha. I can't wait. Why is John such a bastard anyway?
And who received the friggin text message? You never answered my question.

-- You better comment on my profile answering my question. ahaha. xD

I am so proud of mel, I think I'm switching to team john......

yeeeaaahhhh! Now for some
Kennedy action! bahahaha! (:

Finally she grew a backbone!!!!
God I was getting so sick of her falling for his apologies.
About time.
:)

I am so proud of her right now! On the reals, so proud. Like if she were here, I would high five her repeatedly.

So, I definitely cried when at the end of his speech, John Oh said their special apology to her...
Once again, bastard is going down!
I am really proud of Melanie though, a little heart broken, but still immensely proud.
So keep 'em comin'=D

awe yay for Mel, for saying bye bye to that bad boy (:<
i'm so prouuuuud of her *tear tear*.
welll keep it coming, babyyy!
the story i mean.
:p