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  • writing_wrongs

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    I want to kill that mother fucker but he's so beautiful!
    August 18th, 2010 at 06:16am
  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    John is such a douche, good chapter, cant wait to see what happens next, I am so rooting for kennedt right now lol
    August 18th, 2010 at 02:48am
  • spawned

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    OHSHAP
    john is such a prickkkkkk!
    like OMG.
    she needs to just forget him, and get with kenndey!
    goooooodnessss.
    anyway, love this story. it's absolutely FABULOUS :'D
    keep up the good work, girlllll.(:
    August 18th, 2010 at 12:58am
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    WHAT THE FUCK?!
    i am going to get a fucking bulldozer and run over john with it!!!!
    how...how...how... how.. like, HOW EXACTLY CAN HE STILL HURT
    MELANIE!?!?!
    but i have to say, he did warn her which was pretty thoughtful of him but EVEN STILL!
    that.. that.. that...ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSEHOOOOOOOOOLE!
    but whatever. LOL!
    and i like how Melanie knows that saying yes to Bryan affected john as much
    as the whole taylor thing was affecting her and how she kind of liked how it felt.
    i was like, "ooooooooooo... Melanie you sly fox!!! XDD way to give john a taste of
    his own medicine! xD"
    but i feel sorry for both of them though. so much draaaaaama between them! like for real, i feel sorry for both parts.
    why don't they just have sexy time and live happily ever after?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!

    :)))))) weeeeeeee i loooooves this! i can't wait for the next Ketely.
    seriously, how do you make up with all this stuff?!
    you areeeeeeeeee UH-MAZING. not amazing because amazing is such an
    ordinary word, you're UH-MAZING which is just the opposite of ordinary.

    keeeeeeeeeeeeep it up!
    August 17th, 2010 at 02:01pm
  • rubi67

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    Loved The Chapter =)

    Update Soon
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:29am
  • megustajawno

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    I'm addicted to this story. It is SO good. I really feel their emotions when I read. Update soon! (:
    August 17th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • a2nnyka

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    I WANT TO KILL YOOOOU.
    You hurt Kenny and now John?? You evil.
    YOOOUUUUU... I'm devastated.
    TAYLOR RESSE? WHY?? He's over her!!
    Why her?? GOAAAH. And where's kenny???
    Kenny why??? He should be there!!
    AND DAMN THAT SLUT! DAMN HHHHHHHEEEEER!!
    ( I'm ranting,. sorry )
    update soon. (:
    August 17th, 2010 at 02:43am
  • beccuh

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    hate the new girlfriend...
    update soon:)
    August 17th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • Killer.kill her

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    Yeah, so I definitely take back the not being able to kill him thing.
    John Oh is going down.
    Seriously, that is a new low, it's one thing for him to be dating someone after all they've been through, but to bring her to Melanie's graduation...
    Gah!
    Keep 'em comin' or else I'll have time to plan the murder...
    August 17th, 2010 at 01:18am
  • disappearing act.

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    I love Melanie in this chapter. She's a tough little cookie while John is such a DOUCHE. I think Bryan is my favorite in this story, because I'm picturing him super hot and I'm kind of piiissed at John. Anyways, good update!
    August 17th, 2010 at 01:06am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Ah! I called itttttt:) (sort of) haha. Can't wait for more chapterssssss! Update soon
    August 17th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • C-u-on-the-Flipside

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    Another amazing chapter as always! I liked how she didn't immediately give in and she demanded answers from John and then the whole dance on the balcony thing was super cute. But then at the end when he's like "Don't speak so soon..." I was like: oh my god another cliffhanger!!!! It's so intense and I love it so please update soon :)
    August 16th, 2010 at 05:35am
  • h4rrystyles

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    He's back oh my gosh. I can't even.
    August 14th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • disappearing act.

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    How do I feel about John coming back?
    Fan-freaking-tastic.
    August 14th, 2010 at 12:03am
  • the adventure.

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    :D!!!! I'm so exited and in love with thisss
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    uh ohh, I feel like he got another girlfriend on tour...
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:09pm
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    Lalalalalalala.. i feel like i'm frolicking through a field of daisies! xDD
    this chapter is sooooooooooooooooooooo sugary sweet, it could but
    Hersheys out of fucking business!
    I really loved how you compared her feelings into cards; very clever. :)
    and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... J-j-j-j-joooooohn!!!!!!!!!!! he-he-he-He is so
    sweet here. while i was reading the dancing part, i could totally picture it
    in my head and i could even feel myself in Melanie's place, against John Oohs
    cozy chest... *starts nuzzling air* oops. hahahaha. yeah, THAT'S how good
    you wrote it! So good that you make teenage girls hallucinate!
    But keeeeeeeeeeteeely!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS A LOT for making me more eager to
    know what's gonna happen next! I really, really, REALLY wanna know what
    the hell John is talking about. lol.
    i really hope you update soon! ^_^
    as always, Fucking Brilliant Job Ketely! :DDD continue it!

    ( oh my god ^ smiley over load. xD)
    August 13th, 2010 at 03:20pm
  • a2nnyka

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    Kete! who received the other text message?? Dude, you've got to tell me some clues or something. You're leaving me hanging!
    Oh and I like the part when you compared the feelings to cards!
    Seriously when John explained why he did what he did, I nearly screamed, actually I screamed.
    ( my teacher just scolded me, ) lol, it's computer class so.. YEAH.
    Anyway, You have to just tell me some things.
    What happends the next day?
    Why are you always cutting the good parts?
    And lastly, make a facebook. (:
    August 13th, 2010 at 12:18pm
  • a2nnyka

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    FUCK. you're leaving me hangin again!! what the hell is wrong with you KetE? :D

    OH and why did John leave so soon like that? ASS.
    August 13th, 2010 at 12:15pm
  • vexation

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    I wont lie after John left her all I could think was "I will punch him so hard in the penis..." haha. But yea this story is so amazing. Ugh, I wanna know what happens haha.
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:35am