OHSHAP john is such a prickkkkkk! like OMG. she needs to just forget him, and get with kenndey! goooooodnessss. anyway, love this story. it's absolutely FABULOUS :'D keep up the good work, girlllll.(:
WHAT THE FUCK?! i am going to get a fucking bulldozer and run over john with it!!!! how...how...how... how.. like, HOW EXACTLY CAN HE STILL HURT MELANIE!?!?! but i have to say, he did warn her which was pretty thoughtful of him but EVEN STILL! that.. that.. that...ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSEHOOOOOOOOOLE! but whatever. LOL! and i like how Melanie knows that saying yes to Bryan affected john as much as the whole taylor thing was affecting her and how she kind of liked how it felt. i was like, "ooooooooooo... Melanie you sly fox!!! XDD way to give john a taste of his own medicine! xD" but i feel sorry for both of them though. so much draaaaaama between them! like for real, i feel sorry for both parts. why don't they just have sexy time and live happily ever after?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!
:)))))) weeeeeeee i loooooves this! i can't wait for the next Ketely. seriously, how do you make up with all this stuff?! you areeeeeeeeee UH-MAZING. not amazing because amazing is such an ordinary word, you're UH-MAZING which is just the opposite of ordinary.
I WANT TO KILL YOOOOU. You hurt Kenny and now John?? You evil. YOOOUUUUU... I'm devastated. TAYLOR RESSE? WHY?? He's over her!! Why her?? GOAAAH. And where's kenny??? Kenny why??? He should be there!! AND DAMN THAT SLUT! DAMN HHHHHHHEEEEER!! ( I'm ranting,. sorry ) update soon. (:
Yeah, so I definitely take back the not being able to kill him thing. John Oh is going down. Seriously, that is a new low, it's one thing for him to be dating someone after all they've been through, but to bring her to Melanie's graduation... Gah! Keep 'em comin' or else I'll have time to plan the murder...
I love Melanie in this chapter. She's a tough little cookie while John is such a DOUCHE. I think Bryan is my favorite in this story, because I'm picturing him super hot and I'm kind of piiissed at John. Anyways, good update!
Another amazing chapter as always! I liked how she didn't immediately give in and she demanded answers from John and then the whole dance on the balcony thing was super cute. But then at the end when he's like "Don't speak so soon..." I was like: oh my god another cliffhanger!!!! It's so intense and I love it so please update soon :)
Lalalalalalala.. i feel like i'm frolicking through a field of daisies! xDD this chapter is sooooooooooooooooooooo sugary sweet, it could but Hersheys out of fucking business! I really loved how you compared her feelings into cards; very clever. :) and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... J-j-j-j-joooooohn!!!!!!!!!!! he-he-he-He is so sweet here. while i was reading the dancing part, i could totally picture it in my head and i could even feel myself in Melanie's place, against John Oohs cozy chest... *starts nuzzling air* oops. hahahaha. yeah, THAT'S how good you wrote it! So good that you make teenage girls hallucinate! But keeeeeeeeeeteeely!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS A LOT for making me more eager to know what's gonna happen next! I really, really, REALLY wanna know what the hell John is talking about. lol. i really hope you update soon! ^_^ as always, Fucking Brilliant Job Ketely! :DDD continue it!
Kete! who received the other text message?? Dude, you've got to tell me some clues or something. You're leaving me hanging! Oh and I like the part when you compared the feelings to cards! Seriously when John explained why he did what he did, I nearly screamed, actually I screamed. ( my teacher just scolded me, ) lol, it's computer class so.. YEAH. Anyway, You have to just tell me some things. What happends the next day? Why are you always cutting the good parts? And lastly, make a facebook. (:
I wont lie after John left her all I could think was "I will punch him so hard in the penis..." haha. But yea this story is so amazing. Ugh, I wanna know what happens haha.