The Life of An American Orphan. - Comments

  • allie_cat

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    Wow this story is really cool, i love it! But I think I have a idea who Sarah was making out with in chapter 2.. (:
    September 5th, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Awesome update :)
    Whoa......Jen really doesn't need to get snappy with Matt
    Matt really just tries to help her......
    It's good now though that he knows why she's behaves like this......
    He probably will help somehow, but still trying for her not to notice that he knows....
    Woner how he'll help her though....
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    September 5th, 2010 at 07:18pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Graet update :)
    I really help Matt helps her somehow, without making it obvious that he knows though.
    I'd say he could give her the money but she wouldnt take it, would she? So he'lll have to help some other way hmm
    Anyway, can't wait for more!
    September 5th, 2010 at 06:08pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    Val is a bitch.
    I'm guessing that matt is going to show up at her job?
    August 31st, 2010 at 10:44pm
  • SinfullyDamaged

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    dude i just got the emails...
    ANYWHO! great updates. and val sounds like a bitch
    August 31st, 2010 at 05:31pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Oh No!
    Val's at their school... :( Grr, I was really annoyed with Val and all of those other girls in this chapter!
    Can't wait for mooore"!
    August 30th, 2010 at 04:28pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Whoa......I can just smell/sense/feel the trouble now that Val's attending Huntignton
    Especially because she's hangin out with Isabelle and as we know (remember) she wants to make Jen's life a living hell
    I mean to remember that she announced in front of the cafeteria that Jen's an orphan......
    And now that Val's in her clutches (or vice versa) there's just going to be trouble
    I wonder when Matt and Jen finally will get together..
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    August 30th, 2010 at 10:52am
  • kayteexrockstar

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    i cant wait for her and matt to get together!!! :]
    August 30th, 2010 at 03:38am
  • WrathOfTheBagel

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    Awesome update :)
    August 30th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 13: Wow....can you say Stalker? That was really creepy of Val to do something like that!
    Update soon<3333333333333
    August 30th, 2010 at 12:37am
  • IvySaint

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    hmmm, i think val has sumthn up her sleeve....hope it isn't sumthn TOO evil, love it nonetheless! <3 lolz
    August 30th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    I burst out laughing when i saw the words 'Stalian Duck' xD Really glad you brought that into this :)
    Loved Jimy in this chapter! His parts made me laugh so much!!
    And I'm glad you're feeling better now :) hehe
    Oh and take that Zack xD *drum stick to the face* Loves you really Zack tee hee
    August 28th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Haha lol...I watched the movie and it's freaking hilarious xD
    I think the reason why Jimmy was at the orphanage was just a diguise though....
    I have the feeling that he was there to see Sarah and not to chase his stallion duck....but I wonder ...how did Jimmy manage to get to the orphanage faster than Matt and Jen?.....
    But how Jimmy told his reason for being there was funny.....all nonchalant about it....
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    August 28th, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Aww get well soon :)
    I can't wait for part 2!
    Im really getting into this and i love that Matt's starting to like her a lot too hehe
    August 21st, 2010 at 07:26pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Aww.....Emily is really cute
    So the dress didn't go unharmed in the night
    Hopefully she'll be able to get it payed off
    Matt's really cute
    It seems like he really likes Jennifer
    I'm really looking forward for more
    Hope you update soon :)

    Ps. A big get well soon :)
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:02pm
  • FMLYHM Zacky

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    Update soon
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:24pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Yayyyy I love smileys :D :D :D <- seeee
    Darn, I fell really sorry for Matt
    I doubt that he even wants this whole life as one of the rich
    He has to see how the rich people are around each other
    His father is cheating on his mother, he doesn't even care about this son and his mom is in it for the money
    Hoprfully the dress wasn't ruined due to the sprinklers
    I'm really looking forawrd for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    August 13th, 2010 at 03:44pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Great update!
    I hope the dress wasn't ruined...
    I felt really sorry for Matt in this :( hehe
    And they kissed WOOOOOOO
    Can't wait for more
    I love smileys tooo xD :) hehe
    August 13th, 2010 at 01:07pm
  • Mrs.A7X!!!

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    Awesome!!! I love it! Update soon!!!
    August 12th, 2010 at 10:21am
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Loved it
    Seriously can't wait for more :)
    Matt's dad is... well, yeah xD
    hope we dont need to wait long for an update.
    August 10th, 2010 at 03:36pm