July 2nd, 2010 at 10:31pm
I loved this line: To have the sinister, heinous tendrils of evil wrapped around me was something I've longed for.
I spotted a few errors here and there, but nothing major. Overall, the story was great. :)
A few grammar/spelling errors were made, but I could still tell what was going on.
The ending line was great. Good job. :D