its all good, at least you updated. ahaha, this was funny. Stupid/cute Riel. The ending was hilarious though! Good stufff you post here (: Good to hear your updates will be quicker. Could you pleaseeee update, "Our Poison" too? i loveee that story also,, and miss it dearly ;(
OH YES, an update! i loved this. When i read it, it was just like it zapped me right back to November, when the last one was written. Maybe next time, Riel and Kris POV? (:
I love that line 'he punctuated his sentence with a sigh'. That's so visual and it seems as though loads of thought has been put into it to do it differently - rather than just doing 'sighing softly' or whatever.
i'm a sucker for the loners